Sometimes bad things happen so good things can take place.
This time, it's really bad.
A darkness is approaching and it's up to the Mane 6 to stop it.
But what if something happens that breaks them apart?
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Using it’s horn, it swung it’s weapon towards her and backness filled.
Wow. That's such awful writing I can't even. Also an ellipsis is your friend, so don't... abuse... it... so... much...
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Yes thank you. I did say in my note that I am improving my writing skills. I did not say that I was Shakespeare. And thank you for pointing out my spelling error. Again, I did say in my note why there may be errors. Thank you for your feedback and I will take it into consideration.
8656763 We all gotta start somewhere and you could be far worse. Just try to focus on the important bits in your fic, show more of the setting and actions, and please OH CELESTIA PLEASE don't refer to ponies by their colours all the time. We know who Fluttershy is from her name.
8657005
Yes, I know but just in case there are people who don't know who they are (THEY SHOULD) but just in case. I have friends that are getting to it so this is helping them understand who is who. That's the only reason why. I wouldn't do that with out a reason.