Deathwatch 456
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Just something that bothered me. I think the first word in blue should be foal.
The second one I couldn't decide which one felt better; ferocity or versatility.
Also, the word in red should be filly's just to have the sentence make sense.
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Thanks. Spelling isn't my specialty. I'll get to work on that.
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Fixed
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I guess I'll start watching for them, if that's the case. Glad to see you actually read your comment section.
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Why wouldn't I? XD
Besides some obvious spelling errors, and the [space] at the end it looks good
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Thanks. I'm nowhere near average at writing XD
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Average you mean? And it's okay
Jesus can't wait for more
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I'll do my best XD
Glad someone likes this.
Although work and other stuff will be in the way and whatnot.
Yay. Update!
Hooray! We are back!