Never Knowing the Truth
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That's fair.
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I hate the original and alternative endings
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Why do you hate them?
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Read them over then you know why.
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Is it because you think that the first ending goes nowhere and the second ending just up and kills off Twilight?
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Yes
It’s...okay. It’s too fast though. Any point that would interest me was over before I could enjoy it. More details, adjectives, descriptions of what’s going on, the despair Twilight feels, would help to make this more interesting. We don’t have time to really get invested in the situation. Also, the two situations, the two endings didn’t make sense. Why would a dom kill someone who submitted? She literally rewards resistance, which could make sense if both instances ended in Twilight being a slave. But... I don’t know, it doesn’t make sense in any way.