Hmm.

While I like this and think it is a good story, it feels choppy for some reason when reading.

Still though, have a like!

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Thanks. This one will have a sequel where they do get married in the end but it may not come out for a while.

Why just find a spell to generate a magic stallionhood for those two instead of the horn?

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Why just find a spell to generate a magic stallionhood for those two instead of the horn?

Because I find futa incredibly disgusting, that's why nor do I like to depict penises in my stories. I only did it in "Colgate's Practice 3" when Colgate and Amethyst gave Donut Joe a Lorena Bobbit surgery for crimes he had committed in the past.

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Good point.

8600015
Cool, I hate being that guy but it kind of stuck of like a saw thumb to me

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Hey, I'm glad you noticed it. That was a dumb mistake on my part.

great job my friend. sequel please

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It is in my plans for 2018, one that would involve them growing closer, eventually getting married and then Starlight casting that fertility spell upon herself.

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usually shippan it with rarity, plus I think he really wants and the last option, dragons are greedy like that

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if I were starlight, I would fulfill the twin request

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Neither one of them even thought about locking the door.

i wanted to cry but i cry on the inside

10684965

Over the situation Twilight and Starlight are in?

10685039
no,

that they’re getting a foal

10686498

They will eventually, just not right away.

10686501
will there be a sequel

10686510

I'm not sure. I have so much stuff going on regarding story ideas and real life issues that I can't say for sure right now.

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oh, ok