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I'm sensing a pattern here. I think chapter two is breaking everyone's brain.
At the very least, the reader is at a loss for words by the time they finish......the chapter.

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I appreciate the kind words. The hardest part is finding the time to write. I have so many stories going at once, I really need to start updating them all.

Encouraging feedback like your means a lot to me. Thank you.

.........Continue.

cumfetti......... why is that awesome

This had a surprisingly touching and sweet ending. It was also sexy and hilarious at the same time, I've never really seen that before! I think.
Good job, man!

"Yeah!" [Pinkie said, "I swallowed your bird seed twice last night, so you still owe me another orgasm. Berry Jr. wants to fire the party cannon again!"

You use the most interesting words, I swear.

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I like to mix it up. Thanks for the feedback!

a bit strange.

I liked it, though.

except the hotsauce part. BAD! NO!

Also, I did find the language a bit crude and vulgur, but I'll chalk that up to personality stylings.

I shouldn't be enjoying this as much as I am.

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I don't usually read gay clop, but when I do, I read them for the plot.

But seriously, imma read this for the lulz. (Used to avoid gay clop like the plague, but not so much so lately.)

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"It ain't gay in a threeway!"
"But what if all three are stallions?"

If a straight man is confident enough in his sexuality to be a brony, then reading the occasional colt cuddler clopfic won't hurt. (I say this as a heterosexual man myself.)

978144 wait a moment! You're trying to tell me you are a straight man writing gay clop?
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(if you are a woman you can ignore this message.)

UGH!!! SO MANY FACEHOOF-INDUCING MOMENTS!!! This was a horribly delightful read, and I love/hate you for it!

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Excelsior!
And Fappy Wanksgiving!

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>I say this as a heterosexual man myself.
>a heterosexual man
>man

Anything else?

1017796 Okay, let me rephrase: Are you telling me you're a straight man who writes gay clop for anything else than the lulz?

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One brony's lulz is another brony's clopping material. I write with an eye towards both audiences.

M/M clop is a niche market here. What people consider to be gay is a slippery slope. If I would have made Gilda and Pinkie both futas through magic, instead of going Rule 63, then I think this story would've had a wider range of appeal. I didn't go the route of enchanted chick dicks or rubber strap-ons simply because I'd never written a M/M story before. I like to venture out of my comfort zone every now and then.

1019134 I believe i understand the message here, and I think we all can aggree that herm ponies are horribe.(cept Futashy,she is my waifu)

Jk, But you do tell me something. You venture outside your comfort zone just to strive to become a better writer. I can respect that.
Besides, my comment was just supposed to poke fun. No harm done right?

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Nah, we cool.
Thanks again for the feedback!

Futashy is best shy!

holy FUCK yes.
Cumfetti.
YEEESSSSSSS.
you better write more of these.

That was hilarious. Loved it, and the hotsauce part made me tear with laughter

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Know Your Meme: Rules of the Internet

Mother of Celestia...

Alliterative porn...

What is this, I don't even...

That was some of the hottest gay fiction I've ever read. You my good sir must write more in the future.

I gotta say my favorite part was when Bubble was riding Gideon and they were tossing insults back at each other.

~Have a good one. ON TO THE NEXT STORY!

Thank you sir, your words have confused me and my penis.....
ya dick..............

"When the stallion ejaculated, his throbbing dick make a loud noise that sounded like a party horn. Berry's orgasm was unique from other males, because his cock shot out not only semen, but confetti. Colorful paper squares and streamers exploded from the tip of his stallionhood and drifted lazily down onto the griffon's feathers and the surrounding bakery floor."

Stopped reading there.

My boner is deader than dead.

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"My boner is deader than dead."

Berry would volunteer to give it "mouth to mouth."

I'm completely straight, but for some reason I wouldn't mind flirting with a stallion.
Is there a sequel to this btw?
Oh Luna, why did I ask?!

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I know what you mean. I'm turned off by gay sex IRL. A kiss between two men kills my boner faster than anything.
Yet for some reason, gay clop between two stallions gets me rock hard. WTF?

There may be a sequel with Rainbow Blitz sometime in the future, but Pin the Tail on the Griffin is all I have for now.

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I know what you mean. I'm turned off by gay sex IRL. A kiss between two men kills my boner faster than anything.
Yet for some reason, gay clop between two stallions gets me rock hard. WTF?

Exactly!
Anyway, I look forward to this sequel you may write.

Cumfetti... Dafuq...

Btw it changes to pinkie at one point... Yeah, pinkie said, I swallowed... XD might wanna fix that

For you're first gay clop it was quite excellent :3

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Pinkie Pie! Stay in your own universe!

EDIT: Fixed!

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XDDDawwww... What fun is there in that?!

Woah hot story with a tender mon ent at the end I'd love a sequel JS

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I think one with Rainbow Blitz is in order.

I'll write that sequel one of these days, once I've completed some of the projects in my queue.

Holy shit you went to town with that alliteration

I think this is the fourth time I've read this fic. Probably my favourite clopfic on this site!
*cough* only because RagingSemi fics aren't *cough*
Still brilliant though!

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That's definitely high praise! Thank you!

Gay R63 sex? I should have checked on this sooner. In a way, just by this existing, kind of inspired "Gut-buster."

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Thanks!

You may also enjoy the audio version.

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Hehe. Wish I could hear it. I didn't even know you could read clop on YouTube.

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You should see how many people are talking about 120 Days of Blueblood on YouTube. The mind boggles.

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No thank you. I've just recently stopped having anxiety attacks. But thank you for mentioning it.

This story is awesome!
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It's not just ponies for me but it is just internet.

This story blew my mind. I can't... I can't even.... Cumfetti....? Realyy??? Thumbs up, breh

1663692 You aren't the only one, bro.

5702447 your not gay, just bi-curious

This is that one story from 2013 with the NSFW link. I found it at last