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Shadow-Aura

Hey my name is Jamie and this is my life.

Shadow-Aura Joined 18th May, 2015 · Offline

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Arzoo
Arzoo #1 · Sep 1st, 2017 · · 2 · chapter 1 prologue ·
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You didn't even manage to spell the TITLE right.

Shadow-Aura
Shadow-Aura #2 · Sep 1st, 2017 · · · chapter 1 prologue ·
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8400169
Thanks for the hint I'm sorry I missed my accident

Raccoon Writer
Raccoon Writer #4 · Sep 1st, 2017 · · · chapter 1 prologue ·
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Very good so far. I likey.

Shadow-Aura
Shadow-Aura #5 · Sep 1st, 2017 · · · chapter 1 prologue ·
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8400391
Chapter 2 is short but arriving soon

Raccoon Writer
Raccoon Writer #6 · Sep 1st, 2017 · · · chapter 1 prologue ·
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8400923
no, I think you meant Short, sweet and soon.

Shadow-Aura
Shadow-Aura #7 · Sep 1st, 2017 · · · chapter 1 prologue ·
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8401250
Eeyup stay tuned for Saturday

Dragonrim
Dragonrim #9 · Sep 18th, 2017 · · · chapter 2 finding the temple ·
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Příběh byl skvělý! Miloval jsem vývoj osobnosti a způsob přechodu mezi scénami! Váš popis mě udělal šťastný a doufám, že se ti daří dobře! Ujistěte se, že omáčku neumísťujte do prádla!

Luna Lover19
Luna Lover19 #10 · Sep 21st, 2017 · · · chapter 2 finding the temple ·
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You need to work on your grammar, spelling and length. I see an incredible lack of commas. These chapters are far too short to enjoy.

Shadow-Aura
Shadow-Aura #11 · Sep 21st, 2017 · · · chapter 2 finding the temple ·
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8440448
I'm working on that hence why this new chapter is late I know it sucks but I try my best

space race
space race #12 · Oct 24th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 betrayal ·
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If a may ask how did he write a entry on the tablet if he died in the temple

Comment posted by Shadow-Aura deleted Oct 24th, 2017
Shadow-Aura
Shadow-Aura #14 · Oct 24th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 betrayal ·
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He was writing it until he died I guess it wasn't great

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lochbessie
lochbessie #16 · Jun 3rd, 2021 · · · chapter 1 prologue ·
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My gosh I don’t believe it. I’ve been chosen to enter the temple. I am about to be enlightened by the gods. This is something none of my family has had the chance to do yet I'm so honoured thank the high priestess and our gods for being so generous to me. “Noble goodbye my sweet child!” my mother Honest Cause said her arms around me like a rope knotted. When I was woken by one my fellow chosen I noticed we have been kept in a holding pen of sorts like slaves at market or prisoners in the crypt. Then I saw it. A god was walking by our pen. Its mask covering its face was a cold metallic colour it wore armour and heavy weaponry unlike any our smiths could forge in town and it gave me a strange feeling in my gut. Upon staring at this god I saw its hair was a sort of dreadlocks like form pouring around its helm at the back and sides.

Then it stopped at the door causing a few of my fellow chosen to shudder which I thought was weird considering how he was obviously here to take us to enlightenment. Then he pointed at me and dragged me out of the cell along with a mare beside me who began to protest screaming and writhing as if she was scared. Was she a heretic or was there something I didn’t learn. Either way, she and I was suddenly put to sleep again.

I woke in a chamber filled some sort of resin like substance holding me to a wall our gods nowhere to be seen but across from me was the mare who was struggling to get free “Miss why are you struggling the gods have chosen us for a reason.”

“NO I WON’T BE HARVESTED NO NO!” The mare screamed struggling still my words not reaching her “YOU WON’T TAKE ME I WILL BE FREE FOR MY NAME IS SNOW FROST!”
“Miss Frost what are you on about I'm sure you are fine the gods…” I said as she glared at me angrily nodding her head to her left to what seemed to be a pony with this strange crab on its face hugging it a bulging in the stallions throat told me it wasn’t good.

“It’s laying something inside him…. Coming from those eggs in front of us now try to break free or we’ll end up like him!” Snow screamed as one egg opened the one in front of her and a crab creature jumped at her hugging her face despite her screams it attached to her and began to do what it did to the stallion putting her in a sleep like trance.

“WHAT WAS THAT OH NO NO…. MUMMY HELP ME!” I screamed literally shitting myself trying to get free as the stallion woke up beside me the crab creature dying off letting him free “MR ARE YOU OK?”

“Ok where am I?” He asked not knowing what was going on “Ah…. my chest!” he said suddenly urging forward his chest bulging weirdly as if something growing inside it tried to get free. “Help, please…. Please!” he screamed as his chest burst open and a creature came shooting out of the cavity running away. It was at this moment my egg opened and…

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