Shadow was just a normal changeling growing up in her mother's hive until the canterlot invasion ruins her happy normal life. This is a tale of her life from a happy nymphhood (childhood) to the beginning of the light within darkness
A pov backstory to my oc Shadow in A light within Darkness that may involve abuse to certain characters in some chapters
'just a heads up this is like a journal so it's written how shadow would write I usually try harder with grammar but it's rushed due to things in later chapters'
Chapters (2)
Something which I sadly notice is that there is a sex tag, but no romance tag.
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There's no romance in the sex you will understand in later chapters
7397644 sex could mean something like rape or spontaneous, there's no romance there.
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Your on the right lines there dude
I just want to let you know that this, and along with a few other paragraphs, is just one huge run on sentence.
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It's ment to show her personality one that speaks fast and without much sense
7397690 How pleasant.
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may involve abuse to certain characters in some chapters that is a big give away I believe
Heh, interesting.
I'm liking your point of view, and the premise. Good job with Lobis and Bella too.
Also, Loby? I'm sooo using that!
The only thing I didn't like here was the puntuaction. Or the lack of.
It made the chapters feel really rushed. Luckly I have patience for this things, as I read fics with worse punctuation than this.
Also, is this anthro? That part before the flashback on the first chapter confused the hell outta me.
Fot now I'm giving this a "meh". I'll be tracking.
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Yeah it's anthro should have added the tag and thanks for the support man
Before I read it, What is the Dark tag for ?
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Future chapters of abuse and death