Hey my name is Jamie and this is my life.
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This story is a sequel to The Republic of Harmony
sequel to The Republic of Harmony
It has been 19 years since the rise of the empire and the fall of the Jedi and the rebellion has finally hit back big they have stolen plans for a superweapon that could end their existence..
But this is the start of a tale of a boy who would save equestrian but every story has a beginning...
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Okay work on your grammar, another thing you should do is make this into an original story. This is just the original star wars movies poniefied and made into a bad fanfic. Now very few people get this right, and the people who do are really experienced writers. Which you're not, go find an editor to help and just fix up the story as a whole.
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for my grammar I have and editing software that proofreads whilst I'm writing and I'm intending on finishing the whole saga and if the mods allow it then it is ok to be up here
6585565 Then the editing software you have is shit. Get a human editor to help you with your grammar, and finishing the whole saga? Every one will know all the plot twists and who dies and who dosen't. This is why you should have an original story, so the reader can keep guessing instead of knowing everything after the first chapter.
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I like my software (set by British standards slight difference) and i want to finish and then start new series
6586750 Your software is still shit dude, dont matter if you like it. If you want to have a story with good grammar get an editor. post an thread in a group saying you're looking for one and someone will respond.