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Interesting story I'll see were this goes. Are other characters such as Trixie, Ember, Thorax, Zecora, and Discord gonna appear in this fic?
I like what I see so far, keep it up!
I notice that a lot of times when we're in Twi's viewpoint, it says she thought something, but the thought isn't there, just ' , I thought.'
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the problem with my computer is that I can't transfer my words well
Really hope this story resumes soon, would love to see Spike meet the others
This looks like a good start
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Do you need an editor then?
Well, looks like you beat me to the punch on this one.
As soon as I finish(ed) "Spike Gambit", I was going to get back to work on my version of this same story challenge.
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You could still make it work though, you could either make it more Arabic theme like Sinbad or Shantae, or have it take place in SPAAAACE.
Really do like the story though I hope it's not dead
This getting an update? It's been years
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Hey do you ever think of picking this back up by any chance cause this is really good and I wish it could continue