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Sweetmiss2121


I have been suggested to post my MLP stories here as well...so here I am! I am not English so sorry if quality resents that...

Comments ( 32 )

I find funny, for what happened to Heller and give this story two thumbs up, one like, a favorite, and a follow keep up the good work:twilightsmile: :twilightsmile:

“Several hundreds of thousands of people to save...God, this will be hard to do.” the Living Virus moaned in tired despair.

Lol
"It's so much easier to just kill them!" :fluttercry:

its ok but still waiting for the next chapter of the naruto/mlp crossover:twilightsmile:

I am afraid I am writing a story with a quality comparable to feces…

...well I like it.

Awesome chapters, you are doing amazing job. I can't wait to read the next chapter.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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thank for helping my story being added to the group about Prototype, I would have thanked you directly there but it doesn’t let me write...do I have to join to comment?

I wonder if Mercer will end up in a situation where his only option is to release the virus and have the infection running wild

When the f**** did I read this let alone start tracking it
Edit: ok I learned I did read it but I still don’t know when
Later edit: ok now I remember . Still f***ing awesome

How is Alex Mercer both the final boss and the main protagonist of Prototype?

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The second game you play as James Heller and kill Mercer at the end

I can bet Celestia is gonna go full retard and threaten Mercer with Dana. He's probably gonna just fucking kill her right then and there.

I am loving this story!

Good job! I can't wait to see how it ends.

The only thing I don't like about this is that there isn't more to read. Update please? I actually have noticed a scattering of errors in the fic but not quite enough to ruin the immersion. Still a great read.

ok calling it now Five bucks says Alex is planning on making the remaining humans into new evolved.

so there is no way to remain human? yeah, no I chose death, I like my hands to much

Author's Note:

I am not okay, not in the slightest.

What's wrong?

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Few things keep coming up that don't make life enjoyable, most of them centered around my health.
But I Will be okay, I promise :)

Why Sweetie Belle? I think Alex was supposed to say Applebloom a couple of times up there. Also, there seem to be some missing spaces in between some of the words, when there are italics or bold next to regular letters.

Other than that, it's an excellent chapter. I wish you get better.

Comment posted by Sweetmiss2121 deleted May 19th, 2018

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Done! I should have managed to fix both spacing problem and the wrong name! XD I use the same file to post new chapters here and in another forum I won't name to not break the rules, but I fear that is also why sometimes there are those spacing problems, I think it's about compatibility? maybe?
I don't know, I do know that it is a pain comb the whole thing AGAIN to fix that, that's for sure! XD
Again thank you for alerting me :D

Could you do a flashback scene with fluttershy, I kinda wanna see when she tried getting between a dog and his human and the dog took a guards wing.

YEAH! I like it keep up the good work my friend!:twilightsmile:

It's been a while. Plan on flooding us with chapters

I am on the edge of my seat waiting for what comes next because so far this has been an amazing version of the Conversion Bureau your characterization of Mercer is also great because I believe he has quite a bit of room to change and shift to what a story requires

I hope the author returns someday cause i enjoyed this quite a bit

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