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ArcTech_KO
A guy who might write some stories in the future and likes to comment on other people's stories too. And yes, there will be no random blunt hate. (Retired from Writing on here, just viewing)
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"I can't wait to see what happens in this story line...."
-Sans
You get a like just because of that!
Edit: I will also keep track of this story, I like it.
little clunky, but i'll definitely be following this.
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I saw the opportunity and decided to take it. Glad to see it was a good choice!
Mission accomplished!
this looks really good. i've been in need of another undertale and this looks really good.
Chara in Equestria? Probably better than the underground.
this is a great idea with an awful execution. We don't need this kind of bullshit plot convinience. There are plenty of better plot conviniences that simply dont rely on dues ex machina. Chara and Frisk reset, but now theyre in horse land. they try to figure out why, and get back to where they where. ta fucking da.
Hmm... execution could use a little work, but overall, I like the idea! Fav and followed!
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Thank you all for your support and advice!
7387706 You're welcome.
This looks great so far, I'm definitely following this.
i wonder if chara had the same controller but creator that set up there life plan and executed for there little plot for frisk
7393981 In a way, the 'controller' is basically the same as a normal undertale player. That would be the normal concept anyway, in this case, it's a bit more demonic
You do know that the latin ending -us is male?
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I didn't know that. Thanks for letting me know
This story is great so far, and that picture of the crystal queen is beautiful. Is there any particular reason why you set the story when Twilight was still a unicorn?
7398480 The story is taking place just before the season 3 premiere. I should've probably stated that in the description
7399172 Ok, got it. So, are you going to add that to the description? Also, I just noticed that the story is rated M, how bloody is it going to be?
7399205 I just added it. Also for the rating, a teen rating would probably fit it better, but I'd like to keep it rated mature just to be safe, or at least until I'm finished with the story so I know whether or not it would fully fit. So no, it probably won't be too bloody, and if it does contain a lot of gore then I'll probably post a warning at the beginning of the chapter that has it.
7399234 Got it. Do you think people will be able to skip the bloody parts without missing anything important?
7399252 Possibly, I'm not too sure yet. Heck, I'm not even to sure if there are going to be any excessively gory parts. I have a fight or two planned for the story, but those shouldn't be too bad beyond the usual battle wounds. The only thing that could be excessively gory is a possible dungeon flashback scene I'm thinking about. Like I said before, not too sure if it'll even be in the story, but it could contain a few important pieces of info if I decide to do it, although the most important info I'll probably mention after those scenes.
7399295 Ok, got it.
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tbh i keep getting thoughts of sombra's backstory/species and physichal similarities to some of Chra's less than savory representations in the oh so popular glitchtale AU
7439359 I know right. Some parts of the story are/will be inspired from it too. I'll try to not exactly copy anything from Glitchtale, but there are definetly some noticable connections. Especially in the next chapter!
So waddya think?
very good i loved it when you had Chara use her creepy face
Huh. So it's the player going into the computer? That last bit was a bit ambiguous...
Ok, so there are several entities her, some anonymous.
Chara ate the noodles twice by the way...
Interesting. We wonder how Blueblood became enthralled, hopefully it was dispelled?
Keep going! ;)
7487962 Not exactly. So in the game, at the end of the geno run, Chara is pretty much talking directly to the player, so in this fic, instead of a normal player, it's a somewhat demonic being.
7487992 'A game of chess to some, and Chara is the pawn.' Also, where does it show the noodles being eaten twice?
7489767 Possibly =)
7489882 at the beginning of the encounter (just after opening the inventory) and after where she tries to heal but notices it doesn't go all the way to 20.
Honestly, AJ'S accent is pretty good. You even avoided misusing "y'all". But if you ever need help, I'm willing to help. Another fun chapter.
Chara should really tell someone about his premonitions. After such coincidences like "oh hey, this looks exactly like the throne room from my dream!" you gotta believe something's up. Especially as it seems it might not be king Sombra he's conversing with...
Keep going! ;)
7529104 Thanks!
WELL THATS NEW
CHARA FAINTING I MEAN
GO CHARA GO
I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY
I LOVE THIS
FOR ONCE
CHARA IS A GOOD GUY
7906097 Chara is waifu 4 lyfe! :3
Moar.
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More please
Update please
Please update
More please
"Chara is about 13-14 years old"
Me:
https://youtu.be/2WieM8Ep_hs?t=203
Please update?
I would appreciate it if you would continue this.