• Member Since 29th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Sep 9th, 2012

Yoshi Flower


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Fluttershy finds herself facing one of the hardest problems for a teenager. Highschool. Follow her through what she faces through School. Friends, enemies, betrayals and romance.

Ships included:
Flutterdash
Rarijack
Twinkie
Dislestia
Cheerimac
DinkyxPip
Scootabelle
Diamondbloom
ApplejackxSpikexRarity(Hinted in a few chapters)
Thunderforth

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 36 )

The only question I have is...

Why is every quote bolded?

909681

Most stories I have read have the text bolded whenever someone speaks. I always found it easier to seperate it from the rest of the text.
I might be the only one though :twilightblush:

909719 Ah that explains it.

Nah, it's fine, It's just the very first time I've seen somebody use it ike that.

carry on...

and I shall watch you on my throne.

909729 It is Distracting! Hey thats not a bad thing though! :rainbowwild:

909743 Nope! It isn't it doesnt drag me away from the story, it doesn't hinder anything, it was just something weird, but it's coo!

now off to my Roleplay group, I have rules to fix!

If you don't mined.. please don't make this a Flutterdash story. Nothing against you if you decide to though. Really enjoying the story so far. :pinkiecrazy:

910107

:rainbowderp: Oh dear. Are you not a fan of Flutterdash?
But I do have most of this story planned out, as well as the shippings I'll be including. I do have a bad feeling I'll be the center of a shipping war in a couple chapters.

910139 What ever you do is fine. :pinkiehappy: I'm not much of a flutterdash fan but hey it's our story.

910229

Well,so long as you enjoy the story, then I'm happy :pinkiehappy:

910461

Better get to writing the 2nd chapter now

The bold dialogue is really distracting. It makes it seem like everything is being yelled.

910625

:fluttershysad: Oh,I'm sorry. I wanted to try something new when writing stories. If you want, I can get rid of any bold text for future chapters.

Bold quotes make me feel like im watching a play except all the actors are doing is screaming into their mics and the main speakers are on full blast it hurts mine elf eyes to readjust to the differing text sizes other than that great story.

I WILL READ THIS LATER! But at this moment I want to say, I'm gonna find whoever made that pic and kick their teeth in. Seriously, Diamond, fucking, Tiara but no Spike. Teeth will be forced down someones throat along with my shoe for this blasphemy! Also if you want to avoid the shipping war you can always give the ships you plan on sailing in the description at the bottom. Saves time and rage.

915541

Sounds like a good idea, actually. Thank you so much ^^
And...um,I made the picture. I was gonna draw a human version of it later, and the reason why there's no Spike is because I couldn't think of a good ship for him, once I do, I'll add him in. I promise :twilightsmile:

918436 *Cough* Three way ship with Rarity and A.J., cause he's the swagon :ajsmug::moustache::raritywink:

918445

Hmm,three way ship...I'm sure I can fit it in to a few chapters for AppleSpike and/or Sparity fans.

918463 I'd be the Sparity of the lot. But Spike is enough dragon for all the mares :raritywink: There's an amusing irony to this comment you'd only get if you read clop and a particular story of mine, that I'm supposed to be writing right now instead of slacking off on here. Here, be inspired!

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918494

Okay,thanks for the idea,I'll add it to the list of ships. It'll be pretty interesting.
:ajsmug::moustache::raritystarry:

918523 Damn the lack of a salute emoticon!

Happy to assist.

918552

A salute icon? They really need one.

918576 I told potalz. He said he'd look into it for his next custom pack update. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png

918596

Sweet! We NEED the salute icon!

So, who wants to watch me rip the wings of an entire school of Pegasi.

Also, I do find the bold dialogue a bit distracting.

921807

I bet Rainbow would :rainbowdetermined2:

And I know,I'm getting rid of the bold in the next chapter. When I'm not busy,I'll edit it out of this chapter.

924295 Sounds good.

Time to burn down a school! Oh, the memories. :scootangel:

924336

Wait,we're burning their school down? Just make sure the important people get out. You know, Rainbow and Flutters.

924401 Of course. After all, who would share this bag of marshmallows I brought to roast with me?

924417

Well,I'm here. But I suppose it wouldn't hurt.

I look forward to more chapters. (that is... if there will be anymore?)
:yay::heart::rainbowkiss:

wait, they're humans?

Noo is this cancelled or on hiatus? Plz answer this story is awesome,

I really like the concept. I also like that all my favorite ships will be in it. Anyways, what happened? Is the story on hiatus or is it cancelled?

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I don't know? I really want to know what happens next

The ship name for twilight and pinkie pie is wrong it’s not Twinkie it’s tripie

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