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Odd_Sarge


Literally, Reckless. Ponies give this sorrel mare purpose. Be kind. Be happy. Be a good pony. 🐎 1948 - 2024

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The mining town’s residents have gathered, and there is a series of firsts.

There is arguing; there is heat; there is smoke.

And there is no sign of the pony who brought them here.


Thanks to NorrisThePony.

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Comments ( 4 )

An excellent, unique thriller about a topic I don't think I've ever seen covered in ponyfic but one that is pretty near to me personally.

I really wasn't ready for the emotional punch of that plot twist when I first read it.

Wow, the feels.
btw, thought this would be more based on this until i realized it is blue on black lol

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Thank you. Odd and unique is what I do, you know that. And I love the song: I think it nails the mood.
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I still think that’s a great song choice. On top of being a good song, the interpretation you can pull from its lyrics can definitely be applied to the story. Thanks for reading, glad you felt this one.

As a man growing up in West Virginia I have heard a song that was made just for stories just like this.
https://youtu.be/DxfYKgBCePY?si=6n_aoeOHg2p9K_9d

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