Previous Chapters
Close
Chapter 1(bios)1,017 words
Chapter 2 A new beginning (and some more bios)1,095 words
Chapter 3 Cloudsdale1,380 words
Chapter 4 Prism Shine1,095 words
Chapter 5 Fun and Games1,224 words
Chapter 6 Quartz Bell1,069 words
Chapter 7 The finer things in life( final chapter)937 words

Chapter 7 The finer things in life( final chapter)

Chapter 7 The finer things in life( final chapter)

Hi everypony it's me,Glitter Brightstar and I am very happy to let you know that I will be the one to be taking over for Dianne Pie,she has a bit of a problem on her hooves but I know she can handle it,i think it has something to do with a Griffin but I'm not sure, right now I'm heading to the Carousel Boutique to see if Jeweled Apple can tell us her back story, oooo look here are now....

"Hi Jewel!" Glitter Brightstar says happily.

"Oh hello Glitter, just whom where you talking to earlier?" I said confused.

"The readers of this story silly,they want to know about your past."Glitter say brightly,breaking the 4th wall.

"Umm sure I could tell you Glitter,just...um keep the randomness to a minimum understand?"I said.

"Okay"Glitter cheerfully said while bouncing in place.

"I swear this unicorn is going to give me a headace"I thought to myself.

Well then I guess I'll you my name first, I am Jeweled Apple owner of the Carousel Boutique and I am good friends with both "Phoenix" Firewing and Prism Shine,I never had gotten to know the Wonderbolt Captain's real name but I was to nervous to ask her, I think that I'm the only one who calls her "Phoenix" out of all of us but I guess that's ok,I'll learn it eventually anyways I better tell you about my past or I'll never hear the end of it from Glitter Brightstar...

I did not start out as a fashion designer, believe it or not but I was raised on a farm, sometimes when I get upset with somepony I would speak in my old country accent and tell them off, I think that it was due to my aunt and uncle Orange visting from Manehattan that I had discided to leave with them, I felt bad leaving my older brother and little sister behind but I was just so very excited to see what the big city was like.

When we had reached Manehattan, I was overjoyed, I looked around and saw huge buildings and a lot of ponys everywhere, we then reached the apartment that aunt and uncle were staying at, when I saw my room I was hit with a wave of inspiration like I never had before so I started making all sorts of things from mittens to scarves all based around the colors I had seen,my aunt and uncle were impressed with my skills and they said that I could be a good fashion designer when I grew up.

I stay in Manehattan for a few years years,until I had discided to open up a little shop in ponyville,the rest is history.

"But what about Quartz Bell, how did you two meet?"Glitter asked as she had stopped bouncing now interested in the story.

"Well darling I was just getting to that."I said somewhat annoyed that my story was interrupted.

Now where was I,oh right I was heading towards Ponyville when I passed by Sweet Apple Acres, I got a closer look and saw that there was a unicorn working on the farm.

Ah discided to stop talkin all fancy like an then said ta my myself"Least she's a good worker,don't make no sense ta run a farm by ya lonesome."

I went back to my now normal way of speaking and then went to see who the unicorn was,however I did not go very far until I ran into my older brother.

"Hello brother,who is this unicorn with you?" I asked him.

"Quartz Bell, she's a mighty fine worker if ya ask me."he says proudly.

"How is everything,is Applebloom ok?"I asked in concerned tone.

"She's fine AppleJill,don't worry yourself none." he said.

"Thank ya Big Mac,ah knew ta farm would be in good hooves when ah was gone."I said,happy that everything will be okay.

"Well if you excuse me, I must head to Ponyville so I could share my vision with the populous,farewell." I said before leaving the farm.

While I was walking away from the farm, I think that I had stopped for a bit then thought to myself"what if I didn't stay in Manehattan, but stayed at the farm instead, would I have been as much of a hard worker like Quartz Bell?"

"Wow that was a very good story Jeweled Apple"Glitter says happily.

"I guess so but I do apologize if it was short." I said.

"That's ok I don't mind, I love a good story from time to time, that's why I help out Dianne sometimes, she tells the bestest storys ever!"Glitter says brightly.

"Thank you Glitter for listening to my story"I said, I then noticed "Phoenix" Firewing touch down nearby and saw that Prism Shine was with her.

I then went over to them and said"hello girls is it spa day today?"

"Hello Jeweled Apple, and no Dianne needs our help with something, she says it important."Phoenix said.

"i think she needs all of us but i'm not sure."Prism said softly.

"Oh right, come Glitter let us go"I said.

"Yay!,I hope we're doing something fun!*squees*"Glitter said

"Oh Glitter what are we going to do with you?" I asked in a joking manner, we then laughed than went over to the library.....

*post story*

"Hey what about me?!" Aegis says a bit upset that he did not get to tell his backstory

"Aegis Diamondscale, your about 500 years old, your story would be too long and boring,nopony would read it."Polaris Solarmoon had said that before he teleported away.

Aegis then said"ok that was weird,oh well back to work."

Author's Note:

This story is finally complete, I like to thank everyone for enduring this with me and I hope you guys like it.
Credits:
Main characters

Glitter Brightstar

Dianne Pie

Fluttersky "Phoenix" Firewing

Prism Shine(it was the only pic that fit)

Quartz Bell

AppleJill"Jeweled" Apple

Secondary characters

Polaris Solarmoon oc 1

Aegis Diamondscale

Glitter:"Thank you for reading"

Me:Glitter!

1,177 views

Previous Chapters

Comments ( 987 )

Viewing 1 - 50 of 987
- Newest First
- Oldest First

Polaris Solarmoon

Polaris Solarmoon #1 · Apr 26th, 2017 · · ·

This story took forever to finish...

Normal

Normal #2 · Jun 23rd, 2017 · · ·

Very difficult to read. Too much of an exposition dump. I did try. I read through two chapters. Don't just tell use these things about the characters, let us find out about their character in a more natural way.

If you were to meet someone in real life, it's their actions that would tell you about them. Let the story do the same

Polaris Solarmoon

Polaris Solarmoon #3 · Jun 24th, 2017 · · ·

8251031

This was the first story I made...,of course it's gonna be a little bad, I also didn't know that it would of been better to have bios or not, I do thank you for letting me know, if only I knew this when I was making this...

A Different View - Polaris Solarmoon

Also LikedSimilarAuthor

Stats

FIMFiction

Follow & Support Us

Also Liked Similar Author