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Gear Spring

Currently busy with life. Will be on a hiatus until further notice. I won't stop my stories, I love them too much.


This story is a sequel to The Villain: Total Eclipse

It has been three years since the Spike the Dragon was defeated in what is now known as the "Eclipse Uprising". The kingdom of Equestria has since healed its wounds, and has been rebuilt to its former glory. However, whispers circulate across the kingdom about the straining relationship between Princess Celestia and her former apprentice, Twilight Sparkle. Still, the kingdom has had a unyielding peace these past few years.

Unbeknownst to the ponies, a new threat is looming just to the south.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 24 )

*Looks the Story's cover-art*

Hoopa Unbound?

So...who wants to bet it's another one of the royal sisters "little mistakes"?

I hope you could continue this soon! :) I really like this story. Your first book The Villain turned okay to Awesome!! When i read the second book, I was blown away!!! I REALLY CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW THIS ENDS!!!!

Comment posted by EMosite CC deleted Mar 20th, 2017
Comment posted by EMosite CC deleted Mar 20th, 2017

Fuck :pinkiegasp:
Poor Chrysalis:fluttercry:

Really glad for sequal and I can't wait until The princesses meet Spike

OH, shit cool fight but I think Twilight just did exactly what Dijinn wanted :applejackconfused:

interesting chapter :ajsmug:
and I cant help but laugh at the knight mare thing at the end simply cause I have a character I created named Knightmare Supreme who is an evil version of another character I have called Kunai Knight and I was really hoping to be the first person to use the word knightmare instead of nightmare :twilightsheepish:

but oh, well either way good chapter and I really like how the new Spike's name is Thorn like his previous evil pony self :pinkiecrazy:

Knightmare? I never thought I could use this music

Before I read this, what is the Gore and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

Awesome chapter I'm really glad Thorn still has powers and while in assuming he's not as powerful as Spike was when he had the princesses magic I'm glad he can still kick ass when he needs to :rainbowdetermined2:

It been like 3 years, how far would he grown?
I thought new Spike will get over Rarity. SIGH...

Was hoping that Thorn will ignore Rarity. What happened to Spike from the prequel?

he allowed himself to reborn by letting his older self get killed using the help of discord and allowing the foolish princesses to kill him

Comment posted by Aether Spark deleted Oct 25th, 2018

Does this mean he's a protagonist now? (I hope) :pinkiehappy: He seemed quite like spike from before all this and he's acting fondly towards those he previously was angry at. Not to mention I'm confident he's not going to hurt other ponies his only real major beef is with the princesses so I hope he doesn't try to expand on his earlier threat.

is he and Twilight going to have a soulful conversation?

Or is he going to once again try to destroy Equestria once djinn is dealt with?

Are twilight and Spike teaming up to defeat djinn?

When is twilight going to learn that the princesses murdered Spike instead of letting him return to the dragon lands and when is thorn going to remember things? Is he going to remember? Will he forgive?

Is Twilight secretly working with Spike there seems to be some moments that point to this being the fact in the previous. Story.

Will the princesses become antagonists driven by paranoia stemming from spikes rebirth

I have so many questions. :raritystarry:

Update soon please :eeyup:

Coming back hoping this story still continues!

I just really hope Gear Spring hasn't abandoned this, and can continue this soon. :fluttershysad:
I wanna see how Spike's reincarnation would help save Equestria, if he'll ever get his old memories again, and if it'll all end happily.

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