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Gear Spring

Currently busy with life. Will be on a hiatus until further notice. I won't stop my stories, I love them too much.


This story is a sequel to The Villain: Total Eclipse

It has been three years since the Spike the Dragon was defeated in what is now known as the "Eclipse Uprising". The kingdom of Equestria has since healed its wounds, and has been rebuilt to its former glory. However, whispers circulate across the kingdom about the straining relationship between Princess Celestia and her former apprentice, Twilight Sparkle. Still, the kingdom has had a unyielding peace these past few years.

Unbeknownst to the ponies, a new threat is looming just to the south.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 19 )

*Looks the Story's cover-art*

Hoopa Unbound?

So...who wants to bet it's another one of the royal sisters "little mistakes"?

I hope you could continue this soon! :) I really like this story. Your first book The Villain turned okay to Awesome!! When i read the second book, I was blown away!!! I REALLY CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW THIS ENDS!!!!

Comment posted by EMosite CC deleted Mar 20th, 2017
Comment posted by EMosite CC deleted Mar 20th, 2017

Fuck :pinkiegasp:
Poor Chrysalis:fluttercry:

Really glad for sequal and I can't wait until The princesses meet Spike

OH, shit cool fight but I think Twilight just did exactly what Dijinn wanted :applejackconfused:

interesting chapter :ajsmug:
and I cant help but laugh at the knight mare thing at the end simply cause I have a character I created named Knightmare Supreme who is an evil version of another character I have called Kunai Knight and I was really hoping to be the first person to use the word knightmare instead of nightmare :twilightsheepish:

but oh, well either way good chapter and I really like how the new Spike's name is Thorn like his previous evil pony self :pinkiecrazy:

Knightmare? I never thought I could use this music

Before I read this, what is the Gore and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

Awesome chapter I'm really glad Thorn still has powers and while in assuming he's not as powerful as Spike was when he had the princesses magic I'm glad he can still kick ass when he needs to :rainbowdetermined2:

It been like 3 years, how far would he grown?
I thought new Spike will get over Rarity. SIGH...

Was hoping that Thorn will ignore Rarity. What happened to Spike from the prequel?

he allowed himself to reborn by letting his older self get killed using the help of discord and allowing the foolish princesses to kill him

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