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Gear Spring


Currently busy with life. Will be on a hiatus until further notice. I won't stop my stories, I love them too much.

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A friend often feels neglected and mistreated by the others. Sadness turns to anger, anger turns to revenge. This friend lashes out at the mane six by becoming the most devastating villain that they have ever faced. It is up to the girls to fend off this new powerful foe while trying to figure out who it is that unleashed the terrible terror in the first place.

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Well, I always enyoy a good "Spike villian" story, so, I will keep an eye on this.

My Spike's revenges be the sweetest of all.

See Twi! Spike's getting revenge bc you treated him like a slave! You and Rarity.:facehoof:

Welp, I hope this won't be like so many other Spike-as-antagonist stories, who commonly take his perspective of having been horribly mistreated somehow, always, by everyone, and run with it like it's gospel.

He wasn't.

And if he really wants to play the villain, he should face the fate of a villain.

Nice, will he have is own Rainbow of Darkness.

And the look on their faces when tue time comes it will be priceless.

veryy good so far keep it up :twilightsmile:

Oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
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Is it bad that I'm rooting for Spike?

Very intriguing. I'm excited for more.:moustache:

Well shit just got real.

NO DISSSCOORDDDDD!!!!!!!!:fluttershbad:
WHY?!?!:fluttercry::raritycry:

Damn, that was cold blooded.

Oh....well...oh fuck.


7285238 Truer words have never been said before.

:trixieshiftright: Well, this situation has gone bad to worse. Spike aka Thorn Eclipse seem to be doing a great job causing rift between Twilight and her friends when they still don't know what's going on.

:pinkiecrazy: Well, My anger just rose.

I know I should be concerned about this not ending well...

...But for some reason or another, I love the idea of a villain winning through deception, treachery, and cunning.
Perhaps it's bc I'm a villain fan.:derpytongue2:

CURSE YOU CLIFFHANGER!!!!!:flutterrage:
But take your time, I don't mind.:scootangel:

I hate how even in the show character who used to be villain's get more respect and are treated better then spike :twilightangry2:

oh I so hope Spike can take the form of any of the villains he used :pinkiesmile:

what just happened I mean Spike will always be my favorite character but that doesn't mean I like when he kills my second favorite character :fluttercry: pour Discord

Spike you mad genesis I love it but hate it

Dam this just got tense real fast I want to see there reactions when he tells them he killed Discord

Yay Discord!:pinkiehappy:
And things are ramping up into the clouds now...

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That's because the villains are actually respectable characters.

please tell me spike isn't already beaten cause so fare he's the coolest villain I've read in any story :fluttercry: and to be honest so far Spike or should I say thorn hasn't used any power of the other villain's really like could you imagine if he managed to hit Celestia with starlight glimmers spell to remove cutie marks

Some ass got kicked.

Mostly talking to you Spike, but Twi you share partially blame, like 90 to 10.

At this point a time travel spell looks like the only amswer to fix Spike.

Also all the girls are hipcritical bitchs they all over react to thing, Spike’s betrayal after being heart broken makes for more sense than anything they've ever done.

wait so is Thorn using Tireks ability to steal magic to regain his strength cause i'm kind of confused how he went from being outside a cave that I can only assume belonged to a dragon with all his power falling away to being back to ponies stealing magic :unsuresweetie:

You know, this premise makes me want to see a fic where Shang Tsung lands on Equestria.

And speaking of Mortal Kombat...

OHHH CRAAAAAAAAAPPPPP!!!!!!!
Mother-fuckin'- shit man! Shit! I don't even-! Gah! Just holy mother-fuckin' ass kicking shit in here.:facehoof:

*raising eyebrow*...Explanation please.

Comment posted by Harmonious deleted Jul 20th, 2016

Huh, looks like the sisters has some skeletons in their closet.

Well dam I can't help but feel if celestia had given spike the power then none of this would of ever happend :unsuresweetie: so yeah I agree with Spike the princesses are selfish liars :flutterrage: and by the way this is one of the best Spike villiane stories I've read so great job :pinkiehappy:

DAAAAAMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNN BOY!!!!!:pinkiegasp:

:pinkiegasp: :rainbowderp: Didn't expect that to end so quickly. But poor Luna. :fluttercry: And it seems Thorn Eclipse is more stronger then before.

The story will continue in another story coming later this year.

:rainbowhuh: Later this year? Well, I'm curious to see what will happen next.

that was freak'n awesome is it sad that I would of been mad if he lost again :unsuresweetie:
but yeah so far this Spike or Thorn eclipse is one of my favorite villains from any story
this should be his theme song

OH FUCKING SHIT!!!!! NOOOOOOO LUNAAAAA! WHY?!?!?!?!
HOLY FUCKKKKKKKK HE'S ALIVE!!!!!!!
*sips tea*
That was a most enjoyable read.
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7427887 I would love to see an animation of chapter 10 with this playing in the background.

This chapter's end in a nutshell

Are we just gonna ignore the fact that celestia THREW A FUCKING SUN at spike, and managed not to destroy the entire fucking planet!?!

7344102 Spike has saved his friends and other ponies multiple times be it in the background or dereck (can't spell to save my life:ajbemused:)
How is he not respectable?:rainbowhuh:

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He causes more problem's than he's worth, and all Spike-based episodes feel like they are forcing you too like them. The only thing I like about him is his sarcastic attitude, perhaps if they made him grow up a bit and give him a better role, I could respect him more.

This was brilliant! I don't know why I didn't read this sooner.

Oh my fuck

What the hell, Celestia!?

It is pretty sad the celestia would break a promise suck as this, and then think of spike as just another dragon and try to turn it all on him, making it out as if he's the bad guy when he actually just wants what rightfully belongs to him by right and law

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