This story is a sequel to The Villain
After many years of neglect and mistreatment, a seed of hatred was born in the heart of a baby dragon. From that hatred, Spike attained the power of the Eclipse Dragon, but it is not enough to slake the rage that clings to his very soul. He desires the complete destruction of Equestria to make the ponies pay for what they have done to him. He will use everything in his power to see them suffer. It is up to Twilight and her friends to stop his plans from coming to fruition. And perhaps, they will reach out to the kind friend that they once knew.
My body is ready.
Grrrriiifffftttttthhhhhh!...
Wait i mean.
Sssppppiiiikkkkkkeeeeee!
7503946 but is your mind ready?
Excellent start! Can't wait for more.
7504049 Griffith did nothing wrong.
The attempted murder of infant.........that happened fucking fast
My body is ready. My heart is ready. My mind is ready.
My feels are not.
Holy ****. The plot thickens.
This just got better, oh my god.
Is this something that happened in the comics i know about the new evil mirror water stuff not the thorn guy
7523642 If you go back to the previous story "The Villain" it will make sense.
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Oh they're so doomed.
Aw damnit...
I'm sorta disappointed with this turn of events. With Spike as a more justified villain I was looking forward to the reveal about the sisters and his father to the other ponies. Now it looks like we just have another basic villain without good motivation even if he/they are made up of other villians. Well here's looking forward to the next chapter.
I agree with HF Fury, it destroys Spike's development with this chaptee.
I liked it better when Spike was the villain, not a dumb mirror pool clone that took everything cool he had. Disappointed now.
This got interesting. While the mirror pool part Kind've marred spikes plans. It was an awesome set up to showcase that villainous people are selfish and narrow minded. Spike will either be his own undoing, or he will be his own destructor.
Ok first thing Celestia it wasn't your magic in the first place it is Spikes magic you kept it from him I am really hoping that there's a reason why Spike turned so evil so fast like maybe some dark magic from Sombras nightmare door is infecting him but it only turned him evil after Twilight kinda crushed his dream of being taught magic
And I'm hoping that cause I love villian spikes if they have a good reason to be a villian but even for me simply Twilight saying no to magic lessons is a bit of a stretch for him to wan't to kill everypony
But still great story
I LOVE IT.Spike you evil genius
Ok I didn't see that coming
And honestly don't know if I like the turn of events
I like Spike more then Thorn Eclipse and if Spike gets killed or is forced to rely on Twilight to save him then I'm dropping this story
Sorry if that's kinds rude but if he has to rely on the ponies to protect him then that proves he's not even a good villian
If spike is just going to be sent to jail after all this then I'm going to be really disappointed
I love it again So its villian Spike with the power of the Sun which I'm assuming he killed Celestia to get vs vs Thorn eclipse with the power of darkness.
I love it go team Spike kill Thorn and become the ultimate villian
I LOVE IT
spikes finally has the power he was born to have
But I'm honestly hoping Spike doesn't kill everypony I'm hoping he becomes an anti hero so like he won't kill any one inocent but he wont help out Equestria unless he's the only one who can save them or at the very least he wont be friends with the ponies that wronged him
P.s. amazingly awesome chapter
should be raze.
I feel as if Spike went full Kars at the end
I got a Majora's Mask vibe from Spike's warning. "Three days."
Anyway, awesome chapter, love it!
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Well, that is unless a lot of Equestria is below sea level. Then he might just be doing them a favor.
Quite the pickle, Spike is basically screwed either way. I wonder what he plans to do now.
when will celestia tell the truth that the power of the sun and moon was spikes all along.
wow they are seriously going to keep up with their bullshit ?
The bullshit is strong with celestia I hope spike do not loose in the end he should win
7705788 Never.
7706067 All the way to the end...
Really their going to keep up their lies and how the hell is Twilight suspose to beat Spike she couldn't even beat him when he first turned to Thorn Eclipes there is no way she could even compete by this point
Ya know considering one of the sisters was once the bearer of honesty and the bs going down I'm surprised the elements don't backfire or something. BTW I forgot did anything happen to the Elements? I read so many stories it's sometimes hard to remember everything.
7706180 it also just seems like no one cares for spike, or even asked why he's doing this, it just seems like everyone is against him and not taking into account of what he thought, it all just seems one sided in a way
7709104 Ok I'm confused who's Spime
7709638 I mean spike
7711052 Ok just checking but now that I think about it your right the main six don't seen to querius about why he doing all of this
But I guess the main six just think it's all for Twilight just ignoring his dream of being her student
Kind'a short but good and I hope Celestia and Luna realize they just brought down HELL upon the ponies of Equestria And if they keep up their lies then they better pray to any God they have to have mercy on their souls cause we know Spike won't
See how you like that you self righteous, lying little c****.
Also fitting song for the end of this chapter and hopefully the incoming fallout the princesses' lies created
Now it began with fire and brimstone Spike is the god of gods.
Celestia and Luna need to come clean, because when Spike make a promise he keeps it.
Three words...
FUCK YOU CELESTIA!!!
Wow celestia just fuck off and tell the truth and this might be over hopefully
All im gonna say is that CELESTIA IS A PARANOID CUNT!!!
I have a hope and theory for what's gonna happen and if it does all I have to say is it's about time that it happened in a story considering the many events that happened in the official canon.
aw really? there's no limit to how low this celestia can get?
Celestia I hope Spike sends you and your God to hell
YOU STUPID BITCH