It's one thing to create/throw already-established characters in a story of some kind. It's another thing to develop those characters, regardless of the situation they're in.
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7918656 I see.
Finally got the time to read through this! Glad I did by the way. I don't know if you played 100% Orange Juice but at the end of Star Breaker's campaign they apparently reign in her destructive tendencies by having her bake with Sweet Breaker. She says something like "Because I am Star Breaker the blasting fuse to pastries!". Just saying if you want to use that.
8665505 I played 100% OJ. Hell, got the Breaker Pack DLC.
Well at least this one wasn't as dark as the previous one. Keep up the good work!
8707787 How did you like the 'lucky break' aspect? :3
8707787 Made some edits to the earlier chapters. :D
So... No Spike, then.