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*Reads title*
dis gon b gud
*Reads description*
pffffffff HAHAHAHA
This is one of the most touching stories I have ever read
my penis cried
lern2tense
Appleblooms sweat went on Big Macs dick and Applejacks dildo and her sweat was being used as lupe.
Should be lube
lol the discription kinda describes that mindless sex and gore thing that WandererD was talking about
reads description
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I almost died laughing. I don't even know why I clicked on this nor why I read it.
What has been seen
Can never been unseen
;-;
If you're not going to space your paragraphs, at least indent them. I've got nothing to say about the content of this one because I was unable to READ said content.
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Im actually suprised people did read this XD, im not even sure if im doing this for laughs or if im doing this for peoples "sexual" pleasure>>813129
814341 your a hero bro
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troll stamp for you bro
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I would argue that a misspelled word is the least of this story's problems, when you consider that its structure is one big paragraph.
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You know you have failed hard (heheheheh) when the worst part of your fic about incest is how bad its written.
Dafaq
Y u no speak English worth shit?
Learn your grammar so this is comprehendible, please. Also, don't be so mindless, make It more.... passionate.
I laugh at how Scootaloo just casually rolls over the fact that Big Mac just accidentily raped her.
How do u get 5 likes for this
Dafaq did I just read..................
I agree with Rainbow_Dashtruction; you gotta re-read your stories.
Trollgasm. Just the comments. Not even reading it, just going to like/fav it so I can go clop. <3
I don't care if this has bad grammar.
It's still awesome!
This has to be the most beautiful and touching story i have ever read. 10/10
YAY FIRST COMMENT!!!! GREAT STORY BRO I LOVE THIS!!!!!
>troll fic
>people on FiMfic are too naïve to realize that it's this bad on purpose
>proceed to inform the writer how bad he is in the comments
Guys, you do know that it's supposed to get this reaction out of you, right? It's the internet, people don't do these things on accident. Don't worry, Alpha. I appreciate a good troll fic, if only to look at the comments, anyway.
3/10 so far. It hasn't been that interesting. Waiting for RD and Scoots to come into it. Maybe Granny Smith too.
818229 Because.... vampires! (sorry, Friendship is Witchcraft reference). I thought that was funny too.
5/10 now, the trolling has increased in volume and creativity. I like how something happened other than random assfucking. RD and Scoot made it more interesting, and how Big Mac "mistook" Scoot for AJ because they're both yellow.
5/10, this was more entertaining than the first chapter. Let's see if you can improve your score more.
4/10, the chapter wasn't especially interesting. The gore added nothing to the funny meter. Good excuse to get Twi involved, though. I hope the last chapter makes up for this one.
7/10, that giant sexual rampage was brilliant!
Oh god, I'm must be so bored if I really just rated this fic on a chapter to chapter basis. Anyways, thank you for the entertainment, Alpha.
Applejack, let's go to Zecora; she might be able to save or sister without having to almost destroy Ponyville in a sexual rampage!
I wouldn't be so sure about that!
823999 if this story at any point becomes a 5/10, then my fic would be 100/10 for you.
No, that isn't saying my fic is any good, what made you think that?
827627 They're both troll fics. Not sure what you're getting at. :shrugpony:
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872607 Megusta
Upcoming! RainbowDash&Scootaloo
Btw, Keep up the good work
823985 Well, I guess in a way its a troll fic XD I know there are many MANY spelling mistakes, im just really and lazy so I never really get them corrected, for one of the chapters I got one of my friends to correct it, I should probably get him to do the other chapters to. But still, thanks
818229 I honestly thought the same thing, but that was one I only had 1!
818601 The true meaning of sex
818601 The true meaning of sex>>824017 Thank you
818601 The true meaning of sex>>824017 Thank you
818191 Well im French/German, but I shouldnt use that as an excuse, I can still get someone to correct it.
818601 The true meaning of sex>>824017 Thank you
818191 Well im French/German, but I shouldnt use that as an excuse, I can still get someone to correct it.815461 you're 
813014 I get it! Cause they touch eachoth-nevermind....
Your faithful student happydeath
*reads title*
asome... wonder how zecora is coming in the picture???
*reads discription*
i gues big mac was a little bit to big...
''...''
damn better get started its 1:39 here and i will finish it to night!
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here i tought i was bad... seems be both suck ad it... but i cant stop reading tough...
the word hard beening used to much... i had that problem with soft >.>
mabe some blanck rules between the difrend ponies.
and go in more detail like...
applebloom feld how the precum of her big brother was trickling down her moist, sweaty folds.
big mac who couldent hold him self back by the feeling of the tiny, soft, eager, lips of her little sister, and gave a firm thrust of his hips.
the feeling of her folds beening torn apart by the enormes, rock hard sledge-hammer that was her brothers cock, filling her up till the surves of her corvex...
O///o i could go furter but im getting ahead of my self
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he aint talking about applebloom he was talking about applejack... both are orange and big mac says "Oooooohhh AJ you're much thigther then you were a couple seconds ago.''
becus scootaloo aint as big as AJ... just so you know
you better clean the mess at my house becus i shit my self out of the hilarity of the fact that apple bloom is a real 'blower' hahaha
big mac made a big impact on her brain huh? XD
i gues applebloom is feeling a little bit lighheaded now... PFFFFWhahahahaha!!!
i gues that appleblooms mind was ''blown'' apart by lissening to her big broters cockyness XDXDXD
okay if been punny inouf
lol hahahaha
omg okay thats mostly disturbing but insanly amusing, would have loved to see it escalted in a bit more than a shove of the hoove
lol its odd i cant stop ready and must have mooooaaaaar!