I laugh at how Scootaloo just casually rolls over the fact that Big Mac just accidentily raped her.

How do u get 5 likes for this

818229 Because.... vampires! (sorry, Friendship is Witchcraft reference). I thought that was funny too.

5/10 now, the trolling has increased in volume and creativity. I like how something happened other than random assfucking. RD and Scoot made it more interesting, and how Big Mac "mistook" Scoot for AJ because they're both yellow.

5/10, this was more entertaining than the first chapter. Let's see if you can improve your score more.

818229 I honestly thought the same thing, but that was one I only had 1!

One is orange.one is yellow. Is big mac color blind?

Your faithful student happydeath

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he aint talking about applebloom he was talking about applejack... both are orange and big mac says "Oooooohhh AJ you're much thigther then you were a couple seconds ago.''

becus scootaloo aint as big as AJ... just so you know

*Steel grits his teeth, leaning back in his chair.*

Holy crud...this is a CHORE!

"Same offer's up for you too, Steel. Feel free to hide behind the couch."

After that speech you gave earlier? I ain't giving up yet!

"Nnnngh..."

Pinkie? You alright?
"Something wrong?"
"My tummy hurts..."

*Pinkie has shifted from her typical pink color to a solid, deep green, and she leans against Steel to try and stay on her hooves.*

Jeeze...you're really sick, aren't you?
"Yeah..."

Let's take a break for the moment, maybe get Pinkie a drink.
"On it!"

*Steel walks Pinkie over to the couch while Dash flies behind it, grabbing a Coke from the small fridge. Steel helps Pinkie on to the couch as Dash emerges from behind it.*

"Thanks..."

No problem. Maybe you should sit the rest of the story out, eh?
"N-No...I'm fine..."
"I can do it..."

No, Pinkie. You're obviously very ill, and reading more of this story is only going to worsen your condition. Just relax for the moment and have a drink, and we'll hold off reading for a while. Alright?
"You're sure? We were on a roll for a while."

When a story starts causing physical harm to a reader, it's time to stop for a while.
"I don't wanna hold you back though...let's just...finish it..."

*Steel sighs.*

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No, we aren't carrying on until you're better, and even then, I might not let you carry on with us. Dash and I have pretty strong stomachs, we can do this on our own.
"No worries, Pinks, we'll let you know what our thoughts are after."
"I can...still comment on what...I have read, right?"

Of course. Do you want to right now?

"Yeah."

*Taking a deep breath, Pinkie slowly brings herself off the couch, gently touching down on the floor. Steel walks alongside her with Rainbow, as Pinkie makes her way to the computer. She sits down on the chair, averting her eyes from the chapter they just read, and looks down at the keyboard.*

Here, I'll type it. Just say what you wanna say.

"Ok."
"I just want to say to the Author, that this story has made me very sick. It's like that one time I made baked bads...only about ten times worse. You detail everything incorrectly, and there's absolutely no passion in any of it. I can't even fake happiness right now, the story is just...just..."

Pinkie?
"I can keep going."

*She takes a deep breath before continuing, hoof over her stomach.*

"The fact that you took one of my best friends, her big brother and little sister, and just had them...rut each other is disgusting. I feel absolutely nothing good about this story, other than the fact that I could read this in case I accidentally poison myself, and have to vomit up whatever I ate. I haven't got anything to say other than just...scrapping this story and making another, one that doesn't involve-" *burp* "I-Incest...especially f-foal incest..."

...There, done.

"Thanks...I'm gonna go back to the couch."

Alright. We'll continue once you're settled.

*Pinkie achieves a slight smile through her sickly agony.*

"Alright...good luck, Steel, Dashie."

No worries. We'll finish this.
"Right!"