What's Eating Big Macintosh?

A dinosaur! Is it a dinosaur? I bet it's a dinosaur!

(Haven't read but wanted to make that joke. )

Nicely done. I love the Luna sequence and Mac's fear. Congratz.

7486938 Thanks a bunch, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I live to please

I enjoyed this. It's refreshing to see a story deal with the taboo topic of incest in a more realistic way than the typical clop fare does.

I agree with Luna's counsel and Mac's ultimate decision - to reveal his feelings to his sister would more than likely jeopardize their sibling relationship. Besides, even on the off chance that she returned them, they would never be able to have a real romantic relationship in the open - that only works in universes that operate under porn logic.

Overall, a thought-provoking read. Good job.

7490459 Thanks for reading, and especially for taking the time to leave a comment. I'm glad my story made you think (that's probably one of the highest compliments you can give an author). And I have to agree with you about typical incest clop. If that's something somebody likes, good for them, but I think they're deluding themselves if they think it's even remotely realistic.