The Picnic

Lyra just wants to have a picnic with her best friend. Unfortunately for her, Pinkie Pie has a way of messing these things up.

Note: requested by Mcyav.

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For The Plot

For The Plot #1 · Jul 25th, 2012 · · ·

I AM THE FRIST person to like, comment and favourite this. This was short and sweet just like muffins, but aside from that, I found this fairly funny. You win the 74th annual random comment thingie-ma-bob...yeah I'm gonna go now

Lockstep

Lockstep #2 · Jul 25th, 2012 · · ·

I'll just...lower my hand now.

Mcyav

Mcyav #3 · Jul 25th, 2012 · · ·

It was quite good! For someone who claims not to write comedy it's quite a feat. My main complaint is that it fell into your normal trap of not enough writing! You need to write more, detail more and and the meaty filling to the delicious pastry that you keep serving us with these fics! (That's a pretty good one isn't it? I'm impressed with it.)

Bell

Bell #4 · Jul 25th, 2012 · · ·

971510 Well, I only live to satisfy you. I realize it was pretty short. Nice metaphor, also.

Mcyav

Mcyav #5 · Jul 25th, 2012 · · ·

971549 Thankyou! And write more! More I say!

Bell

Bell #6 · Jul 26th, 2012 · · ·

972832 I'm glad you liked it. This was my first attempt at writing comedy, so I'm glad someone thought it was funny.

Q Illespont

Q Illespont #7 · Jul 26th, 2012 · · ·

As much as I like shipping these two ... this was a good read. Although I now have the line 'No ... Lyra straight' in my mind as she walks away from Bart and the Waco Kid..

Sakkin Hak