I love ponies and closely next to that is foxes, possibly a passion for magical pastel horses with wings and horns for some strange, unknown, disturbing reason... and that's why I'm here... basically
Ever since Starlight became friends with Trixie, she has always been hanging out with her more and more. Twilight has been noticing it and she realizes what Starlight is feeling.
Twilight let Starlight and Trixie became great friends but nothing more.
Starlight soon figures out that Twilight knows and she realizes that she has developed true romance feelings for her best friend.
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The ponies in your story or the fandom?
Twilight would probably say "Spike and I" here.
I bet they fell instead of feel.
Although with some of these books, the really magical ones, just might be able to feel...
Sorry for the nit picking, friend.
7309061 Everyone!
7309199 Thanks! I will fix that.
7309955 Sorry, there are StarTrix images on Derpibooru from around a year ago. People were on the ship before No Second Prances.
A sfw example.
I thought Fluttershy already have a home: Her Cottage of Kindness.
Jealous?
That perverted son of a gun!!!
7317327 XD Lol!
What's the puppy's name?
7892503 I have no idea yet, I was actually trying to come up with that.
It's probably going to be... The Great and Majestic Trickster!
7894678 Boy or girl?
7894980 Probably a boy, and Starlight might just keep him ;)
7897150 He shall be named Zam.
7897627 That's a good name. He will be named Zam!
What kind of dog is Zam?
7904840 I think he would fit as a husky :)
This sounds pretty good so far. I can't wait to read more.
So you say you wanted advice?
Well, overall, this is a fine story. But perhaps you should go more into detail with describing things? And you most definitely should start working on putting commas, because sometimes in any story things get confusing if there are no commas.
Thanks for reading, and have a wonderful day/night! I hope this info helped