Terror in the Pleasure Dome

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Misty Spell

Misty Spell #1 · Oct 12th, 2016 · 1 · · Footnotes Chapter 1 ·

Interesting fic so far.

LeoneHaxor

LeoneHaxor #2 · Oct 12th, 2016 · · · Footnotes Chapter 1 ·

Terror in the Pleasure Dome

NicLove

NicLove #3 · Oct 13th, 2016 · · · Footnotes Chapter 1 ·

Before I read.

What's the Horror for ?

Captain_Hairball

Captain_Hairball #4 · Oct 13th, 2016 · 1 · · Footnotes Chapter 1 ·

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SPOILER!

Twi and Dusk make a sex doll that is accidentally more sentient than they intended her to be. Horror is a mix of monster and psychological, with a big fight scene and MAYBE self harm depending on how close I stick to the first draft.

Hope that helps?

Captain_Hairball

Captain_Hairball #5 · Oct 13th, 2016 · 1 · · Footnotes Chapter 1 ·

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EXACTLY.

Actually Neil Peart and I are both riffing on the Coleridge, poem but I love that song.

Rasael

Rasael #6 · Oct 13th, 2016 · · · Footnotes Chapter 1 ·

#nice

Glad to see this up, well done. :D

Misty Horse

Misty Horse #7 · Oct 13th, 2016 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

I sense potential philosophical discussions...

LeoneHaxor

LeoneHaxor #8 · Oct 13th, 2016 · 1 · · Footnotes Chapter 1 ·

7638238 I should give the story an actual read. As a fellow writer with ongoing works inspired by Xanadu, though perhaps a slightly different manifestation, I would be lying if I said I was not intrigued on how you go about it.

Tech_Priest

Tech_Priest #9 · Oct 15th, 2016 · 1 · · Footnotes Chapter 1 ·

A very interesting idea. I look very much forward to seeing where it leads. Although your little spoiler doesnt seem to really fit what I tought was going to happen in the future., and honestly my idea sounds a bit more interesting in my head.

Still, I will be waiting.

Captain_Hairball