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Staadnauthursil
I am Swedish, born and raised in the fine city of Göteborg, or Gothenburg in English, I'm male, single, heterosexual, I like to read, write, paint, Tabletop RPGs, playing video games and cooking.
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OMG an alicorn male story ? I have read a bit about alicorn female but only once of an alicorn male story !!!! You have my attention unless he become an alicorn female in that case I'm ditching this story faster than lighting strike. Anyway the story seam good. I want more :)
8042196 I am very glad you like it. Wonderful when the first reviewer is someone positive. And you are the first reviewer on any of my fics on this site. This is my first, read approved, story on Fimfiction. I am currently working on chapter 2, chapter 1 is finished but I need to make some refinements to it.
And while it may be a spoiler so will I write the answer to your inquiry here. In a spoiler tag.
There is no Transforming A Male into A Female concepts here, except for maybe future ponies whose ancestors got scrambled because of time travel effects. But that's less Transforming and more Alternative Universe.
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8043377 Edited, along with other spelling errors I discovered, thank you for notifying me.
great opening love it
8046539 Thank you, glad that you enjoyed it.
This is a promising story so far, scrunching the Faustecorn herself is something, and make a promise to get her back home is very interesting. I can't wait to see what will happen next, we don't exactly know how he is supposed to to find a way to get her to come be welcome back to her world. I am sure this will be a very interesting story.
Oh, by the check out my DeviantArt and let me know what you think of it...
Great story so far really like it cant wait for teh next :D
Before I read this, what is the Dark, Horror and Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
8047305 Death, war and blood. I am going to be describing the damages of dead, dying or battling beings. I might add more of it later on but that's what I got planned for the first ten or so chapters.
8046738 Thank you for your comment, it was wonderful. And so is your art. I find most of your work to be very good, and some exceptionally wonderful. I am an artist myself, went to art school, and I use sketches for ideas for my own stories, I will be posting some of them on my blog after I post the second chapter, I am currently working on chapter two, chapter one is just being edited a bit at the moment.
8046965 Glad that you enjoyed it. Hopefully I will keep up to your standards.
Added the missing music video, hopefully you will enjoy the destruction, carnage and despair with this fitting music.
Well that's one way to make a really spectacular entrance along with a horribly bad first impression to you your girl friend's children. Not only will he have to do an up hill battle to get their trust, be become their step dad, but now they can actually "reasonable" argument to their mom as to why she shouldn't hitch herself with him. Still this was a really good second chapter, and it makes me hungry for more of this. Looking forward for the next chapter then.
8050468 Making some rather wild assumptions there buddy. The relationships haven't even been established, the only thing that Laura and the poor sod has been through is a one night stand, not a dating service.
I like this idea and look forward to the next chapter.
8052612 Glad to hear, Chapter Two will take a bit of time though, I am hopeful that I will have it up and running before the end of the month however.
bit confusing and sad but goodjob I guess
Huh pretty interesting to see where this will be going
hum... I feel that this chapter was rather weak, in the sense that the motivations of Starswirl and Luna of going bonkers feel out of place and have the two of them going crazy in the same chapter for different reasons makes it hard to make sense of it.
I think Starswirl would have needed more characterizing and having Clover being her daughter or grand daughter feels like it cam out of nowhere and having Celestia and Luna being wholly ignorant of that fact feels out of place. Keeping such a focus on that filly also adds to the problems of the last chapter making it even weirder. Having the guy trapped on two separate occasions, also feels out of place.
I think the expedition that was after the guy was interesting but developing so many characters that don't actually add to the story as a whole makes it feel out of place to me.
Don't gets me wrong, there are many interesting elements to your story, but it all feel disjointed and nonsensical. I believe that the chapter should have been split it in two at about when the guy gets buried. I think more planing to the story would be needed, developed your characters more also, if you hope to keep this story interesting. You have a good start so far, I hope you will be able to salvage it in the next chapter.
Now, I'm not saying he looks retarded, but he looks kinda retarded.
I'm reminded more of a cross between a crow and a Komodo Dragon than a pony.
8081120 Yeah, I kind of felt that as well when I posted it. I think I will have to edit it a bit, but the core concept I will keep. I will try to flesh out this chapter a bit further before I post the next one.
Announcement: With some suggestions and talk I have decided to alter the chapter quite a bit. Ending it at Starswirl's death and the disappearance of the Stallion of Torment, the art will remain since I kind of jumped the shark, or rather alicorn, here. So I will be posting a new chapter, involving a much more detailed part of Luna's degrading mind by the curse and finally her fall to Nightmare Moon, whom I will explain a bit about as well. But that's for later, for now I have altered the chapter a little, added one more scene involving Starswirl, I might add one more but if so it will be late,r for now I need to get some sleep. A sleepy mind makes for bad stories, well sometimes.
8081224 The crow part was actually intentional, not sure how you see him as part Komodo Dragon, but that's probably because I am unused to using the art tablet yet. And it is kind of difficult to make shaggy looking fur properly since, you know, the details gets kind of lost. But that's part of the progress of improving.
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It's mostly his muzzle/ face that gives me the impression of Komodo Dragon media.gettyimages.com/photos/komodo-island-komodo-dragon-closeup-picture-idsb10066633h-001
8083235 I can honestly say I do not see the resemblance, but considering I am relatively new to painting ponies so am I not going to bother arguing against it. The art is only there to add a visual concept for the story either way it is not THAT important.
Well, it's definitely a bold entrance as a character to a new world.
I definitely like it. New background to canon, interesting plot idea, and Gore. Definitely Gore here.
Have a fav package with tracking included for free!
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True, I'm just a rather.... odd individual in regards to what I see and do.
8084377 Glad to hear you approve. I want to make this story a bit dramatic and dark, not just all the friendship and love in Twilight's era. No, I want to reveal and challenge the dark and gory history of a country that had to crawl out of a cesspool of bloody conflict, betrayal and emotional turmoil to become the unified, strong and stable nation it is in Twilight's time.
Must have more
8148908 Wonderful of you to request more. I will hopefully get my next chapter done before June, I am hoping but do not expect too much from me. Hope you enjoyed the chapter to its fullest. *Bows politely*
Where is Generosity?
I think this chapter rewrite turned out pretty good.
8150692 It went on vacation. Hehe. Sorry I missed that error, it is fixed now.
8148947 well I can not wait for more chapters it's a very good story and thanks for answering my request.
So he pretty much gets off at fear
U dun goofed Celestia
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Yo when are you gonna update this again? It is fucking awesome!!
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I have produced your new chapter. Enjoy.
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I will say a lot of... Yes here and say also. Give me a month or two.
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Read the below note and you will get a decent answer. Than you very much for your positive outlook on this story.
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Meh. Pretty much. Terror and Courage are his power outlets. I was a bit inspired by Darkwing Duck and Beowulf for that speech.
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There are more reasons the, goofing, but whatever floats your boat.
>>Staadnauthursil
Thank you for letting me know.
Darkwing Duck reference intentional or not is very VERY fitting! :)
This whole story and the writing is excellent! Voted, tracked, favorite!
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I thank you very much for the compliment. Darkwing Duck was one of my favourite cartoons as a child, so I drew my inspiration for my character's speech from there since when I thought of myself as a Lord of Terror I would start saying things like "I am the terror that stalks in the night. I am the chilling wind blowing against your neck. I am the teeth and the claws of the darkness. I Am Maleficus Victoria!" And that's pretty much how it snowballed from there. With some additional inspirations from Beowulf.
I am currently about 80% finished with Chapter 5, but I am having a slight difficulty working out a lyric I am trying to write down, I am thinking of posting a Blog Post to see if there is anyone who can offer any kind of advice.
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Don't worry guys everything will work itself out. My face when the timeline is fucked.
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Well... I am going to have to go with, Nope, on this one. Well for a great deal of future chapters at least.
I'm honestly appalled that I haven't read this beforehand. This my friend is an absolutely amazing work of fiction and while that may only be my opinion I would like to think that that still stands for something.
I truly hope you continue making more chapters of this and that I can see the end of the story eventually so until then safe travels and try to avoid swords!