Nick and Judy best ZPD team in the force but when an animal claiming to be a princess of another world trying to get back home by retracing Starswirl's the bearded steps from an unlikely ancient clue written in old equestrian language that only Princess Twilight Sparkle can read. but is it truly what she wants?
Rating may change. and some spoilers for Zootopia
Starring...
Princess Twilight sparkle as 'the princess'
Judy Hopps as 'Carrots'
and Nick Wilde as 'Wilde,N' in
Poni-topia
Chapters (10)
First! Just kidding. I just hope do this justice.
Yes! Somebody actually did this!!!
7298670 do you like it?
First few sentences and I come across
red for spelling, blue for capitalization, and green for wrong homphone (similar-sounding word)
But the premise is interesting enough. I'll read some more.
Edit 1:
probably bad translation for the journal entry, but it just kept on nagging on my mind.
Yellow for added words and punctuation
7298731 thank you. I will fix when I can. what is strike through?
7298746 strike through is
removemaybe I'll read a bit more
Should there be an anthro tag on here because the characters in Zootopia are all anthropomorphic animals?
Your chapters could use a lot more detail as I'm having a hard time following the story. Try to describe the places, the characters' looks, thoughts, and emotions. If you could do that, I'll give it a like.
7299628 I am one person, writing this story i will try to do this but I need help that is the readers or comments will help so will you help me? this includes everyone. in simple words is...
7298731 Can you be my editor, please?
7300328 there are plenty of editors on fimfiction that can help you.
I hope this turns out great! Good luck.
7300262 I'll give suggestions but I have my own story to write.
Ehem. Yeah... I saw this when it was first uploaded, and the first thing I thought was "This thing really needs an editor..."
And now that I see it in the looking for editors group, I'm rather confident that this may rise up in the fanfic ranks.
7303724 I was the one who suggested this be in an editor group. The concept is inventive and I can't wait for the finished product!
Good concept, mediocre grammar. Following this to see where it goes.
Last name of Nick is Wilde, not Wilder
7311155 sorry will fix.
I need to know to continue this or not.
I might a been a jerk with Twilight, but some answers will be known in next chapter.
7311155 idk hes pretty feisty ;P
7386293 you be too if your kid was stolen.
i believe i see the problem, your grammar
what do you mean last story save?