Twilight Sparkle had been noticing a growing number of ponies have been disappearing from her fair town, at first she dismisses these disapperences as unexpected moves or untold get aways. Though as time draws on, the mare becomes more suspicious. Where is everypony going?
With the newly formed Peace-colts, strange behavior from her closest friends, a mysterious Pony in Black; Twilight will encounter trials and realities she could only conceive in her worst nightmares
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Chapters (8)
Second story. First one tanked hardcore. Please, do give feedback; good, bad, or indifferent. I know some might see what's coming, but i promise you, it goes far beyond that.
Why the fuck hasn't anyone commented on this wonderful twisted story.
Yeah, maybe I should have expected this to be another Cupcakes spinoff (albeit with a lot more apparently going on), but I didn't.
So the (former?) target of Twilight's hatred... is somepony who went through more or less the same thing she did, and went off the deep end like she's in danger of doing. Clever.
I can only fear that Zecora did to Rarity whatever she did to Doctor Whooves and however many others... however that fits into Pinkie's overall plot.
And I guess Pinkie deliberately shipped Twilight and Buckler then....
You said it earlier; the writing isn't the best on a technical level, but the plot was intriguing enough to hook me in, even if this isn't really active anymore. It seemed only fair to finally leave a comment.
When is the next chapter? It's been almost 8 years.