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(Sequal to "Earning Freedom". Might be able to stand alone, but it's best if you read the first one before this)

After Big Macintosh escaped wrongful incarceration, thanks to foreign stallion named: Sin, He, Spike, Sin and another pony with questionable sanity named: Shade traveled around Equestria to live life without the constant frustrations and restraints of home. However, due to a double cross by Princess Luna, Sin found himself on trial for for assisting ponies he believed wrongly imprisoned, liberate themselves from such disgusting misuses of power and authority.

The four were joined by Twilight, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie under order of Princess Celestia as Sin's sentence for his guilt. The eight ponies found themselves among the ranks of the "Bloody Sky Captains", the freedom loving crew of the airship "Gonshinian". After seeing life stripped for the first time by the hands of his mentor, Macintosh is in shock. He had never thought death acceptable by any circumstance, though; his life had never been directly threatened before either.

After a brief conflict with the Triple M. airship: "Judgment", The "Gonshinian" has been in travel for the past week due north over the Griffin Empire to transport Sin, a former Senator of the Federation, to his homeland to investigate a suspicious lobbyist campaign. Though the motives are not yet clear, the effects seem to drive a wedge between the representative Senators, and the arbitrating Centaurs. All compliments of a Mega Corporation named: Triple M. and it's well known Vice President: Malich.

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Comments ( 63 )

Looks nice, really looking forward to reading it. I hope its going to be as good as Earning Freedom :)

1554296 I hope not to disappoint.

I like sin! looks like the type that likes to get in trouble

lol love the whole twimac thing hope luna wants to share

Good going Celestia:facehoof: Thanks to you Spike is probably going to have DSD:fluttercry::flutterrage:

I'm kinda surprise and happy Sin lied to Spike but he will probably hear about this later.:pinkiesad2:

1815044 I like to think I'm not bastard enough to do that... But I am :pinkiecrazy:

I'm not surprise and I don't blame you.:pinkiesad2: I blame Twilight for her bad timing.:twilightangry2:

And I was right:facehoof: Though I have to ask what was in that letter he got that made asking for the truth:rainbowhuh:

And in all honesty Shade could done worst seeing what happened to that one village that Shade decided to visit:rainbowlaugh:

1823707 It was more or less the thought of seeing Twilight again with the thought that he might have killed someone fresh in his mind. The letter was basically saying that they were coming back. It was implied that he wanted a definitive yes or no before he could talk to her again.

1823773

Eh, that makes sense. Lets just hope he gets over this quickly. If something big and bad happens he will not be of much help to the others or himself.

1824125 Oh, I assure you, what is next to come will be a hot button for all involved...

On a personal note, thank you for commenting. Those always encourage me to write more. :pinkiehappy:

No prob. I'm a sucker for a good story involing Spike.

One of the main reason why I like this story is the political debates that pop up. I enjoy these kind of talks since it gets the mind flowing.:twilightsmile:

O-kay...I'd be lying if I said I'm interested and looking forward to see what Star Shade has in store.:trollestia:

1857096 You'd be lying if you said you were interested? Awww, you make Shade sad face. :fluttercry:

1857109

Huh? Oh sorry typo.:twilightblush: what I meant to say was I'd be lying if I said I'm NOT interested and looking forward to see what Star Shade has in store.:trollestia:

1857134 Maybe a little too much. :twilightoops:

Wow:rainbowderp: Sin has manage to not only point out a possible really big problem but also get the topic away from himself. In all honesty I was wondering when they were going to realize this.:facehoof:

ROFLAO:rainbowlaugh: Oh man, I can't breathe. I got to hand it to Star Shade the was funny. The main reason why I like this fic is because of all the debates and for the most part are logically true on Sin's part.

1892489>>1892536 And this is why I wish Shade was real. :derpytongue2:

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Yeah:ajsmug: as long as you arn't his target:twilightoops:

Well...so much for no drama.:ajbemused::facehoof: I wonder how the others are going to take this.

1910371 Oh, you're going to hate me. :scootangel:

1911087

Sin is going to labeled as the bad guy and everyone isn't going to trust him anymore?:trixieshiftright:

1911164 Oh, you are Really going to hate me. :pinkiesmile:

Still loving Star Shade and if Sin and Pinkie get together by the end of this it would be the weirdest pairing ever.

1923557 It would, wouldn't it? However, I'm not really sure how that one will play out. Maybe they'll be shipped, maybe they'll literally kill each other. It's all part of the fun.

And a quick question, why does everyone love Star Shade so much? Don't get me wrong, I love the character too (mainly because he can do anything at any time and doesn't really need a reason), but what is so appealing about him?

1923669 You can say the same thing about Deadpool from Marvel and even Pinkie for that matter. There is something about the random and crazinest about them that you can't just help hop on join them for a crazy and mad ride.

This is quite an emotional and probably important realization for Spike. I hope it helps him in the future. And I like your pick of music.

1944001

It's what I was listening to when I wrote that bit...

I just hope I did it right enough to the point it made sense.

1944040 And it show and I think you made your point across rather well in my opinion.

Wow, looks like Sin and the others have been a bit of an influence on Twilight.:rainbowderp:

1961553 What are you talking about, Sin doesn't cheat.:trixieshiftright:

1962419 I was talking about her being so innocent.

1962523 I object! Under what grounds, I'm not yet sure. But Shade did NOT have sexual relations with that mare!:rainbowderp:

1962564 Probably but being around those guys has helped her from being so innocent.

1962606 Hmm... Maybe. Or maybe she's a mare who knows how to get what she wants.

We may never know... Except me.

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