So much time has passed and I'm still just as anti social, hooray.
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Rex was for the most part a normal albeit a very shy 16 year old boy who just is just trying to get by in life. one day though, that was like any other normal day.Something happened that would change his and his faithful companions life.
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You may want to do some editing, proofreading and spellchecking. The idea seems good but the story is just unreadable.
Its a good story all you need is an editor the it will be perfect but i still enjoy it
no where to hidde heeeheee not in mordor
7292670 thanks for the feed back this is my first story so I am very likely going to improve over time
7293091 thanks! I know I need an editor haha, this is the third attempt at writing a story the other two were rejected
Mainly because of much needed commas, if you can recommend any good editors I'd very much appreciate it. Also I will be regularly updating it (because its summer break and I have no life) so look forward to much better writing in the story
7293629 that sounds awsome btw i dont mind any spelling errors im just pointing out that you ned a editor i myself dont care
Is he dead!?
7377424 ;)
7378327 lol it sounded like his head got crushed. I legit almost shouted "no leave Rex alone!"
7292670 I got an editor
7292670 It's not his fault that your illiterate...
7293615 dubl check your grammar and spelling watch your pacing . don't have as many "and then this hapend" moments nobody likes em ...and why can't the main caricktor lift a pug ...there not that hevy ...personally I would have made it a corgi ...not that they are all that much hevyer than a ..."well fed" pug but a corgi just fits better in my opinion. ...also there names could be switched to stop any confusion between the main character and his dog... Sory if Rex is your real name BTW I just think it is more of a name for a dog...or a really badass cat.
Looking back at this story, I realize this was the first one that read on this website, I only wish it would continue. But thank you nonetheless.
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Lmao maybe man