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Synesisbassist


A washed up old writer who still tries to live in a heyday that has long since passed...

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Many months after Alex appeared in Equestria, he is living with the mare who took him in, and gave him a home. That mare was Lyra Heartstrings. Although the two fell in love, it was soon evident that she was not all she seemed to be.

The mare kept him away from other ponies, alienating him to all of Ponyville. He couldn’t get a job, nopony would make more then idle chit chat with the man in fear of what she might do to them. She was clearly, obsessed.

But enough was enough, he sees how wrong it is, and takes a stand against her. But that may prove to do more harm, then good to every-pony involved.


This will be a short story, around 10 chapters or so. Romance, family, a couple of dark/sad moments. Rated T for the moment. I doubt there will be any clop, major gore. But there may be violence and other abusive elements.

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Comments ( 28 )

Intresting, can't whait for more!

Wheres the human tag?

Have to say it. That picture of Lyra is scaring me.

8220262 That was more-or-less the point.

8220244 Added! Sorry about that!

8220191 Thanks for reading! :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Neutral Boy deleted Jun 10th, 2017

Me: just reading along minding my own business enjoying this here sto- *falls to ground and crys *SUP NERD IM A CLIFF HANGER ENJOY THE LONG ASS WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

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Dude, you and me are on the same fricking page. That picture freaked the shit outta me when I saw this. But this guy... this guy is up to something, son of a bitch left a serious cliffhanger, I want more!!! :pinkiesad2:

This is very interesting so far. Definitely following this for sure. Might want to add a dark tag though, just a thought.

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tbh, I haven’t read it yet. I clicked on it because of the picture. And now, I regret EVERYTHING!

Comment posted by Comets luck deleted Jun 14th, 2017

I'd definitely read more of it was updated

MUST HAVE MORE! PLEASE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!

Sweet Luna, that ending there got my pulse racing! Well done, well done indeed!

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Thanks for the kind words! :twilightsmile: I have been meaning to get back to this at some point. :unsuresweetie:

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I really hope you do, I am loving ALL of your stories (I am reading three of the longer ones as I type) and I hope this one get's some more content :pinkiehappy:

Also I have never seen a Human x Lyra story that has her with this Obsessive, slightly crazy mind set, it's a breath of fresh air if I am honest :pinkiehappy:

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I'm going to come back to this soon, I've just had much larger projects making the road a bit rough. But rest assured, I WILL return to this. It may only take some time.:twilightsmile:

please update this i love obsessive storys

Vaya está historia si fue corta y yo creyendo que iba a tener por lo menos 10 capitulos mas o menos.

Really hope this gets continued, its really good.

The picture has me trembling. I'm not kidding! That's the face of a psychopath!

*5 years later*
still no 2nd chapter - i call this here deserted lolXD

I loved this please tell me you didn't abandon this it was so good please make more soon it are to find story's this good

You got any plans on a new update buddy ol pal

If you do end up dropping this could you give us a small summary of what you might have been planning to do with the story?

Once again hoping this gets continued some day, or at least officially cancelled so we don't have to wait around anymore.

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