War. It has been going on for many years before I arrived. And it still seems to be going on as I speak. I tried, all my time here in this foreign land I've been told I was their last hope. The one who could end it all, free the ponies and save all the land. I was this... "Key." But I also heard among these legends, I could be their greatest threat.
Am I the their last hope? Or will I destroy this land like many have told me I would...
Special thanks to my editor, MysticGuitar! for pre-reading and editing Chapter 1 for me!
Story contains some violence, language, perhaps clop at some point, but I'm not sure.
Hmm.. This is good!
I noticed some small typos, but that doesn't really affect any stories for me at all.
Please do continue this! I am stalking this story.
5537113 What typos are you referring to?
THERE IS NO KEY
5541006 Forget about it
It could have been me who read something wrong. Heh. I read pretty fast.
5543339 Nah, I missed one spelling error in my edit, and a few structure errors. I had no idea this dude would credit me as his editor, so I was a tad lazy. :
But yeah, when you basically said there were a few typos, I kinda got confused by that. The only typo I missed was caused by a font error, with i looking so similar to L. I didn't run the story through a spell check, so I didn't notice how Iight was spelled with an i rather than an L. Heh. It was my own laziness, but whatever. Story turned out alright.
5543712 Keep up the good work!
Peace.
I believe this HIE story will go a long way, don't let me think otherwise.
MUST HAVE MORE!
Is this history dead??
Gosh dammit why is it always the ones with a good premise that always die.