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Synesisbassist


A washed up old writer who still tries to live in a heyday that has long since passed...

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War. It has been going on for many years before I arrived. And it still seems to be going on as I speak. I tried, all my time here in this foreign land I've been told I was their last hope. The one who could end it all, free the ponies and save all the land. I was this... "Key." But I also heard among these legends, I could be their greatest threat.

Am I the their last hope? Or will I destroy this land like many have told me I would...

Special thanks to my editor, MysticGuitar! for pre-reading and editing Chapter 1 for me!


Story contains some violence, language, perhaps clop at some point, but I'm not sure. :twilightsmile:

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )

Hmm.. This is good!

I noticed some small typos, but that doesn't really affect any stories for me at all.

Please do continue this! I am stalking this story.

5537113 What typos are you referring to?

THERE IS NO KEY

5541006 Forget about it :twilightsmile:

It could have been me who read something wrong. Heh. I read pretty fast.

5543339 Nah, I missed one spelling error in my edit, and a few structure errors. I had no idea this dude would credit me as his editor, so I was a tad lazy. :
:rainbowlaugh:

But yeah, when you basically said there were a few typos, I kinda got confused by that. The only typo I missed was caused by a font error, with i looking so similar to L. I didn't run the story through a spell check, so I didn't notice how Iight was spelled with an i rather than an L. Heh. It was my own laziness, but whatever. Story turned out alright. :twilightblush:

5543712 Keep up the good work!

Peace.

I believe this HIE story will go a long way, don't let me think otherwise. :pinkiecrazy:

Is this history dead??:pinkiesad2:

Gosh dammit why is it always the ones with a good premise that always die.

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