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Tbillz


Lives in Monroe County, Michigan. Currently employed and member of the Michigan Wing of the Civil Air Patrol

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After the Battle of Los Angeles in our world a portal appears and six marines as well as some of their comrades appear in a whole new world where their same enemy is invading it.

Rated Teen for Cursing and some gore.

Need editor.

Special thanks to ConfusedTexanDreamer for giving me some ideas on how to make the story better.

Edit: Some chapters will be posted daily, others will be posted when I finish editing them. Vielen Dank.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 6 )
Comment posted by Admiral_Gravleos deleted Feb 21st, 2017

7188308 I'll try but it's one of Pinkie's mysteries on how she won them in the first place.

Comment posted by Admiral_Gravleos deleted Feb 21st, 2017

I really couldn't read past the first quarter of the first chapter, this story needs some serious revision to it when concerning dialogue, pacing, grammar and punctuation.

7193449 I see what you are getting at and will consider it once I have more spare time. But never the less, thank you for pointing that out.

Comment posted by Admiral_Gravleos deleted Feb 21st, 2017
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