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Rytex


Hey, you know that really good author who has quality stories that everyone loves? I'm not that guy, he's over there. I'm that mediocre guy that's lucky to have as many followers as I do. Thanks!!!

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Ten thousand years after Night Zero, and the Republic of Equestria is in a state of prosperity like never before. President Sunbeam and the citizens of the Republic are preparing to celebrate the Deci-Millennium and it seems as though nothing can go wrong...

..which of course means it all will.

Twilight Sparkle, a student at Canterlot University, lives about as normal a life as any quadruple-majoring college student can live. She helps out at a local library, she aces all of her classes, and she still has no idea what she wants to do when she graduates. But when she finds a mysterious man in a black cloak watching her, her life is changed forever as she finds herself involved in a plot to free an ancient enemy from her lunar exile.


"No, this is not a Star Vs. The Forces of Evil crossover. This is a story written purely for fun, with a semigeneric title on purpose. It will be serious a lot of the time, but on the whole, it will not be a story that takes itself too seriously. The story is rated T for some swearing, maybe a few lewd jokes, and for a few darker things that will happen way later, but not enough to really cast a shadow over the whole story. With that in mind, I do hope you all will enjoy this!" --Rytex

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

Hm, solid start. I have to admit I lol'd at Flare's 4th wall-breaking quip, :rainbowlaugh:
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Like I said, story won't take itself too seriously. And neither will the characters. It's weird, but I see it like I'm a guy following them around taking notes while they perform on a stage, and they try to ignore me, but from time to time, they'll comment on me being there.

Still, that will be far from the only fourth-wall break of the story.

Hmm organization xiii lookin Guy better watch out lol

So, NMM has Organization XIII working for her?

Interesting. Let's see where this particular rabbit hole will take us.

7171501 Don't forget Totally Not Axel showed up earlier.

(Even though they both actually have nothing to do with Organization XIII).

7171542 I just realized that you used axels title as his name lol

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Err...

I used to be on Fanfiction.Net, and I wrote a story featuring Jack Thomas (my Starbound protagonist) being a human thrown on Earth, with his pony self being named Flare Dancer since he couldn't remember who he was (the story was pretty awful, I wouldn't waste your time). I just felt like throwing an appearance or two in there.

As for the cloaks, bear in mind, in the Kingdom Hearts universe, the cloaks are used to prevent darkness from tainting the heart of one who travels through corridors of darkness. Figured I'd reuse the concept here.

Intriguing, looking forward to more

Really good chapter! Some of the interactions were a little... Stiff, but other than that, good job

about damn time, was starting to wonder if another story would be added to my 'dead' list

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