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An absurd individual who like ponies.

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Eevee is a creature known as a Pokemon. Pokemon are powerful creatures that fight alongside humans. Eevee has been working with Mac Jason for a very long time, stopping crime with him to the best of her abilities. It's her job. It's her passion.

Clara Mayson is an average girl. Training the coolest looking Pokemon she can find and desperately wanting to be a Pokemon master.

When the Pokemon world and a world full of candy colored ponies collide, these two individuals meet up. One in their original form. And one in the form of a cockatrice.

And the question on everyone's mind is: 'why is this all happening?'.

Edited by Angry Lass.

Note: Romance would probably also be another tag for this (it'll probably show up more a lot more in the later chapters).

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

Why did you delete some of it?:rainbowhuh:

This writing is just... awkward. The present tense doesn't flow very well, and people reading a Pokémon fanfiction will already know what Pokémon are. Also, using Smogon terminology in this sort of setting sounds really out-of-place.

7181743 I did. I'm working on editing it to make it better.

7186023 I'm working on editing the story, so that I could make it better, so I temporarily took down the 2nd chapter.

7205248 Got it. Well, the chapter is definitely better than before, and I can't wait to find out what caused this whole mess if it wasn't Discord. However, I spotted two errors: his name is Flash Sentry, not Century, and he's a stallion, not a mare.

Make more chapters! please please please please!:raritycry: its killing me not knowing whats gonna happen!

I proofread (Or edited?) both chapters. (I don't know if I caught all mistakes but... eh. Sorry for not editing this for a long time >-<)

7205494 Dun't worry 'bout that sir or mam! I edited that part on the gdocs folder. We'll just have to wait for him/her to copy what I edited, or proofread? :rainbowlaugh:

7206379 I'll copy what you edited, don't worry! On the description would you like me to list you as an editor?

7183257 Thanks for the advice. I'm currently editing to improve this story's quality, and I'll take all the help I can get!

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