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Dilos1


I have gone to find myself. If I get back before I return, please keep me here.

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It has been some time now since Arceus relocated most of the Earth's pokemon to the Equestria, along with a few select humans. Many individuals have long since come to acknowledge that their newest residents are here to stay.
Mavis is one these individuals, and she is content with her life in Dodge Junction.
If only her heart were not so heavy with the undercurrent of remorse.


A side story to Zeusdemigod's "A New World, A New Way".
"T" rating for certain themes later on.
Tags subject to change.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 14 )

Interesting....
will some of the Pokemon have homes more suited for them?
say, Pokemon that know Dig, or are subterranean, live in a small tunnel network nearby?

7107921 Most likely. My basic thought process is there are probably a few pokemon who are more used to living with humans most of the time, while those who were in the wild will just live like they always have.

Hmm, this one starts already months in? I guess that's a change. Helps it feel unique.

7204539 Yeah, I figured it would be easier as opposed to trying to play catch up with everyone else, and I don't really like large skips in time as a writing tool.
I know nothing major has happened so far, but that aside what do you think of it?

Sorry it took so long for me to get back to this. I get distracted really easily.
So far it's fine, but it's really too short right now for me give anything definitive.
If you can spare the effort, I suppose you could make sure that those... what are they called? Eh whatever, basically the words like: their, they're etc. Sometimes I notice those being used in the wrong context. Tiny issue, but if you feel it's worth the effort.

7228723 Will do.

Really? Just thirty residents? Even for a small place, that feels like an unrealistically tiny population.

7461807 Do you think sixty or so would be a better number?

7461880 I think at least a few hundred. Double digits is way too small.

7462817 You sure? To me the general pony population for most towns, even Ponyville, always seemed kind of low. You hardly ever see more than a few dozen individuals at any given time in the show. The Crystal Empire is one of the only places I've seen in the show where there is a very large concentration of them.

7464033 How many ponies did you estimate were in that Queue for Cider season? I estimate there would've been a couple hundred at least.
How many you can see in most scenes doesn't seem like a good way to estimate the population to me.

7465589 Fair enough. Will keep that in mind. Aside from that what did you think ofthis chapter?

7465592 Meh, fairly normal chapter. Introduced a Garchomp. Threw out a troublemaker. Normal stuff.

Hmmm, this little chapter shows how unused to normal behaviour Pokemon are, despite being fully sentient creatures.

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