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Abramus5250


Learn to love the writing, of telling a story that you want told, and not the recognition that comes with it. When skill and passion atrophy, write for yourself, and in time, you'll inspire others.

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Enjoyable story, definition of slice of life. I like the portrayal of how family life is a lot of sacrifice but still worthwhile in the end. :yay:

Good to here your back bro Also check out Never Broken it is the King of all Spike fics at the moment so ya you lost your title to a Spikex warhammer 40k leagion of the damned fic. Also thier is a link to on my page if you want to read it

Welcome back! Good story and your not missing anything good with the show. Trust me!:ajbemused:

And good luck on the search and with the training.:moustache::ajsmug:

Nobody ever said life like this would be easy, and Spike was okay with that: at least he had a loving wife and family to help him through it all.

Amen to that. Putting aside all the desires and aspirations I have for life, I recognise this as being my prime goal. It was quite heart-warming to read. Thank you.:twilightsmile:

Also, Applespike is a guilty pleasure of mine.:twilightsheepish:
So kudos to you, and good luck with your job!

Other than that, I've become rather "into" Warhammer 40K and have a story on that, and really, I just lost so much momentum and interest in MLP. I have not even seen season three in its entirety, let alone seasons four or five.

It's okay, I'm the same way. Well, the not seeing seasons 4 and 5 part, not the Warhammer 40K part.

This was a nice and simplistic story. I liked it. Good to see you back and I hope the fire fighting gose well.

Ima be honest, I don't like Spike. At All. However, this here....this story here.....is a masterpiece.

I decided to put aside my dislike for Spike and give this a shot and boy was it worth it. The way you wrote Spike as a father and AJ as a mother to a miniature herd of children was perfect. Not a line or action out of place, nearly no "telling" in the story and the conflict was so well threaded throughout that I felt immersed right into it, scene after scene.

I may not like Spike as a character, but I sure as hell loved him in this one.

7063698 Those are are some of my favourite moments in reading fan fiction, when someone captures a character absolutely perfectly. It's something that takes care and consideration, and is a joy to read.

The way you wrote Spike as a father and AJ as a mother to a miniature herd of children was perfect. Not a line or action out of place, nearly no "telling" in the story and the conflict was so well threaded throughout that I felt immersed right into it, scene after scene.

Agreed 100%.

Loved your story you sir earned yourself a follow from me:ajsmug:

7063698 In my own opinion, Spike is the best character in the show.

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I can respect that good sir

7265419 I respect yours also, good sir.

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