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Overall, I'd say the story wasn't bad. A little rushed and a little too light on the details during the fun bits, but what was there was better than okay. Maybe slow down the story, flesh out the details and the interactions between the characters. Just a thought. But as I said, overall pretty solid.
7063385 yeah I admit I did rush to get this finished. I've been working on this commission for a while now. I was eager to start the next project, but I'm glad you like it
Twilight's characterization was really off and the whole thing was so rushed that nothing sunk it. It was pretty eh for me honestly.
Haha that ending tho! I now respect you again... Sorry but I HATE scat!
7064811 thanks! I know I know scat isn't for everyone ^-^ I like to reach out to all audiences. But I'm happy that you like my other stuff!
7065608 yeah. I like this one and the one about Ditzy.
Short yet sweet. I think that the clop should've been expanded a bit more but the overall clopfic isn't half bad.
7067401 I'm glad you liked it otherwise. I've been working on it for a while and tried to be as detailed as I could.
Yeah Twilight. Let you assistant assist you. I so want to read that, as well as, Rainbow thanking Twilight for making the potion. Please?
*Finishes reading*
.....MOAR CLOP PLEZ
no srsly. its too good for only one chapter.
Dude, remember, capitalization means the difference between
"I helped uncle Jack off a horse" and "I helped uncle jack off a horse".
Capitalize your names!
7070496 hmm... I never really thought of a sequel, but I might consider making one now
I'll start working on it soon, and I'm probably gonna take my time with it.
7063393
Just letting you know, a commission implies money got exchanged for the story. If a guy just asked you to write it and then you wrote it, it's normally called a Request.