There are a lot of things this show has taught me. When I started watching, I never expected it to affect me as much as it has. But now that I'm here, I don't know what I'd do without you all!
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short threesome? but there's only 2 character tags....
4834709 Well... she's not the main character
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Big Mac Shipping.
4834829 Happy?
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4834904 hateful snuggle wuggles
4834904 Why not both?
Its so awkwardly adorible
How do you get your writing so epic?!
I ship it
Despite one thing that annoyed me, I enjoyed this fic.
What annoyed me? It felt like I was reading someone's online dirty roleplay logs or something
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Just saying.
y'all better stay out of that shed.
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That's some nice stuff ya got there.
Probably the billionth comment on the topic, but y'all better not come in Fluttershy's shed now. She gon cum for u.
First off, a question; is this anthro or not? I mean, she's got breasts and they both have hands, yet he has a massive horsecock. Is it like a hybrid thingy? I'm confused.
Another thing; this, among other things, bothered the hell out of me as I read this:
then later...
Isn't this kind of a contradiction? Pre goes in the condom just like cum...so was he wearing a condom or not? if so, how did the pre leak out? if not, why did you say he put one on?
I mean, I KNOW this is porn about magical (anthro?) ponies, and there's supposed to be a suspension of disbelief and all that, but...
Another minor complaint is that this is just a massive wall of text. It'd be better if it had been divided into two chapters (I see a perfectly good place where the story could be split into chapters: right after session one and before she wakes up.)
Overall, the clop was pretty well written (except the GLARING issue above), and the characters were fairly loyal to the show's depictions... but the writing was kind of disjointed and quite inconsistent. Not that it matters, nor anyone cares,but my rating for it is.... a 5/10: fairly average, but good nuff to clop to.
I loved it all it was awesome beyond awesome they all would make a cute herd .

it was a beautiful and sweet fic I hope that there will be a sequel where they all become a herd.It was a awesome read I can't wait to see what happens next between them all and what happens next to them all.
4840466 Anthro should pretty much cover that first part... Second part I fixed. Thirdly, I think you need to refresh your definition of 'Anthro'
That was so hot. Keep going!
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You might want to fix that, m8.
4834776 stop making me HUNGRY !!! .. rofl
"Short threesome"? That struck me more as "short rape."
Puppies have a habit of swarming you if you let them.
So he dug the foundation, poured the concrete, smoothed it, measured out boards for the walls and is hammering them together? He's fast, or she's a slow dreamer.
The pacing is pretty start and stop.
Tickling her? They might as well get naked now, nothing can stop them.
The clop suffers a lot of Then X happened, then Y happened, then Z happened.
Keeping one at body temperature is going to ruin it. Keep it cool, or at least room temperature.
They have not been called breasts this whole story.
5201940 glad I'm not the only one. It was kinda....Well lemme put it this way: if Dash hadn't consented, this story would involve more jail time and less sexy time.
5261862 evry single one its a Sin
4979901 Just about to put that as well!