Princess Celestia has been in charge for over a thousand years. After sending Luna away to the moon, she was left to raise the sun and moon on her own. But now that Luna has returned she discovers a secret that Celestia has kept from her since she had been released from her dark form... After raising the sun and moon for many years, Celestia's powers are weakening, and now, her royal task is killing her. This is Luna's final chance to make up for her mistakes as nightmare moon, and make her big sister proud one final time. (Warning: this story contains a generous amounts of feels. You will be crying by the end of this story.)
Chapters (5)
Ahh the feels! Y u do dis?
6957699 X3
You get an upvote for the premise alone.
6957899 thank you very much! Stay tuned for more, I'm glad you enjoyed it so far
7/10 not enough in the capital of the amaericas in the here story.
also, starsz are made into exsistance and idk how that now works.
please tell me because i run al calss in havord and my students needs to know about this.
And now you get a fave.
story as well touching
I would imagine a sequence where celestia guides luna's beyond life
6962654 if I write a chapter about that, I will be sure to give you credit.
Well when your tasked with either shifting the position of the planet your standing on around your star or shifting that stars position relative to your planet, a several million tons worth of burning gas and nuclear reactions, on a daily basis; Its gonna take a toll on you no matter how powerful.
6975530 EXACTLY
Will this story have a happy ending?
7000013 you'll have to wait and see
Unfortunately, I didn't cry, but with this first sad-fic I read since forever, its safe to ensure you that it was a great welcoming to the sad category of fiction!
7000048 as of this present time, I'm sure every one in the brony community spilled all their tears when they read my little dashie. So I don't expect anyone to bawl over this. But i did try to make it as sad as possible. It will get better though so stay tuned!
Technically speaking, the "Journal of the Two Sisters" book says that while trying to move the sun and moon can drain normal Unicorns if they don't have the necessary numbers, the act of celestial movement actually EMPOWERS Alicorns.
Give Celestia and Luna a few thousand more years of moving the sun and moon and they'll start spinning the whole damn universe around just for giggles.
7000053 added an 'alternate universe' tag because I didn't take that into effect.
7000052
I will!
Poor Luna...
(Please continue!)
7821311 oh I plan to, I'm just taking a break for now.