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I must say, I don't read much clop anymore, but I'm glad I took the 20 minutes to read this. Kind of wish the third chapter was longer though. Wanted to see what Octavia would do when she was released. Maybe a sequel is in store?
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a sequal would indeed be fun
I myself would love to see the aftermath when Octy wakes up... even just dialogue would be amazing, but I can imagine it myself, happening a plethora of ways.
Lots of said-isms and some continuity errors (e.g. Can Octavia hear or can't she? The start of Chapter 3 in particular suggests she can). Not enough build-up or description of anything that should be built up and described.
Also, this feels like a blunt, lower-quality, and shameless ripoff of another story I saw recently that also featured Vinyl-Octavia noise shenanigans.
Disappointed.
One thing:
Wouldn't it been enough to do only that to to obtain 'Peace and Quiet'?
Nice story.
Before I had read the story:
You can't have both.
After I had read the story:
I was so wrong.
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Of course it would have been, but it wouldn't have been as amusing![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
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Octavia is supposed to be able to hear fine, its just the soundproofing spell around the room the prevents her from hearing anything outside of it.
I don't begrudge you your personal opinions or constructive criticisms regarding the "said-isms" but if you are going to accuse me of writing a "blunt, lower-quality, and shameless ripoff" you could at least have the decency to tell me what it was I supposedly copied so poorly.
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I've had several requests for a sequel. I have to say that I will see what I can do.
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Thank you for your kind words.
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I shall always be hamstrung by my godawful memory for titles and names.
I only remember it was more or less the same thing.
Sorry if I hurt your feelings and/or was unclear on things. I write much better feedback when I don't have flu.
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I vaguely remember a fic titled ". . . But Duct Tape is Silver" which had a similar premise and, I will grant, superior writing. If that was the one you were thinking off, I did not mean to imitate it. My only goal was to write some gratuitous clop.
Also, I wish you a speedy recovery from the flu. I just got over a case not that long ago![:pinkiesick:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesick.png)
I really like that story! You're a great writer!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
it was a good read![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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Thank you![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Nice and short. A good read. Keep it up!
DID SHE LET HER OUT!?
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Eventually
Okay. Huh. This certainly happened. Okay. Well! Not even going to say oh well. Oh well!
Please excuse me while I ponder on the nature of inner peace.
(You're awesome, and what you write is awesome. Please keep being awesome.)