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DAWWWWWWW
This was a very good fic, decent pacing & I only spotted a couple errors, but otherwise it was a great read, good job...
TwiJack is best ship![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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Just a nit to pick, shroud more implies the sort of thing you'd wrap a corpse in before committing it to the earth, not so much pretty pony lingerie. Maybe slip would be a better option, or robe?
Reminded me a lot of Home Grown by bats. Enough so that I had to go look it up again. But you handled it differently enough that it still feels fresh and I particularly enjoyed the ending bit with the interactions of the whole family. Bravo.
Normally I don’t read r34 stuff but I have to admit that this one gave me some... excitement. Well done
Okay. I for one am curious as to what happened to make them both pregnant.
Thought of this song from the title
I suppose this is probably a happier, if dirtier, use of the phrase.
A feint is a combat maneuver where one makes it look like their attack will come from one direction before striking from another. Fainting is what Rarity's couch is for.
A dependent is someone who requires a more mature being to care for them to keep them out of trouble/fed. Somebody who is dependable would be capable of caring for a dependent.
Simple typo.
Aside from those few mistakes the story was pretty good. More cute than titillating but we can always use some more cute in our lives.
I want to read the story that caused twilight to have kids now. XD
Just how wrong did it go?
Wait what? Twilight sparkle have a dick!? Wow! That's Sick!