• Member Since 9th Nov, 2015
  • offline last seen Mar 11th, 2020


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2199298 No problems. You're writing great stories and I can't wait to see the rest of them ^^

Thank you for all the faves today!

2139047 No problem. It was a good one :)

Thank you for adding "Friends We've Yet To Meet" to your favorites! :ajsmug::rainbowwild:

2138532 Well, Past Sins that I find well done. Then there's also stories that are good in different ways. For example, I love "Irony of Applejack" and its sequal "Advent of Applejack" which is a story about a alternate unverse Applejack if she was a changeling. This might be because AJ's my favorite of the m6 but I still find it well-written. Another story I would rank highly is "Stardust", a crossover with the game series XCOM. It does a good job capturing the XCOM atmosphere and making it feel like the MLP universe is just another part of the game and not just a crossover.

How I would rank your story? While the parent's story is kinda cliché did I still like how it was used to make Sweetie Belle see the other side of Sisterhood and I liked that concept. There's stuff to improve on for sure but I would probably give your story a 7 out of 10 maybe.

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