The Apple Pie is Burnt

Twilight tries to cook a romantic meal for her and Applejack.

Spoiler alert: it doesn't go so well.

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The Literary Lord

The Literary Lord #1 · Aug 12th, 2014 · · ·

I love happy endings!

Emerald Evergreen

Emerald Evergreen #2 · Aug 12th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Twilight Sparkle: Gifted unicorn (now Alicorn), was Princess Celestia's greatest student, defeated Nightmare Moon, Discord, Chrysalis, Discord again, and Tirek. Can't even cook.

ThunderChaserCreate

ThunderChaserCreate #3 · Aug 12th, 2014 · · ·

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With all that other stuff she' s doing, do you think she has time to learn how to cook?

Emerald Evergreen

Emerald Evergreen #4 · Aug 12th, 2014 · 1 · ·

You'd think that living in a library, she'd at least come across one, just one, cook book.

Apparently not.

Barnabi

Barnabi #5 · Aug 13th, 2014 · 2 · ·

How'd it get burned?!?!

Stunt Monkey

Stunt Monkey #6 · Aug 13th, 2014 · · ·

Hahaha, this story was just one fuck up after another. Had me smiling the whole time

Lily Gingertail

Lily Gingertail #7 · Aug 15th, 2014 · · ·

This was a disaster, this was extremely hard to read.
This was brilliant.
~Tobben

ThunderChaserCreate

ThunderChaserCreate #8 · Aug 15th, 2014 · · ·

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Erm... are you serious? Was there any screwed-up grammar or something?

Lily Gingertail

Lily Gingertail #9 · Aug 15th, 2014 · · ·

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Oh i wouldn't know. i'm saying that reading Twilight and Pinkie failing is hard for me to read and a little cringe inducing.
Don't get me wrong the story was relay good, it's just the characterization that is a little hard to read for me. i mean pinkie failing at baking and food making seams a little of character, and Twilight not swimming in cook books from the moment she relished that she would be making dinner for AppleJack. Just saying character is a little off
If you want a number from me i'll give this story a 8.5/10