This was freaking awesome! I still never intend to read the sequal (one reason being I don't read 2nd person stories) but this was… wow. There isn't nearly enough stuff like this anywhere. Kudos!

31.media.tumblr.com/12d4ab9d2f6e5724a414057128404bef/tumblr_mhrmbbFqLi1rjzeroo1_500.gif

6794570

6995267 I think the problem with animals in MLP is that they are semi-sapient. Like the dogs for example.
They are a bit above the average sentient animal we have on earth, so they are very close to sapience, which is conflicting since every being we consider Sapient is to be treated as a 'person'.

Hey, if you didn't write pony porn, there would be less pony porn in the world, and that would be tragic. Seriously though, this is some good shit.

What about a manticore?

How to describe this story other the. WROOF!

Hi there! I gotta say I love your story! The personalities were spot on, the grammar and word choice was great, too! The story was believable and super hot. Loved it <3