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I am confused and intrigued by this chapter... I would like another chapter but that is all up to you.
6789523 One is almost done, and appreciate making a comment to show your interest. I actually wanted to give Double Down's background through interaction of other characters, with him making a show here and there. The next chapter should be out tomorrow, but i figured I'd put this one out and see if anyone had found the premise/writing favorable so far.
Huh. I'm both intrigued and confused by the story. It's a good start, but a lot of the backstory is still needed. Like what the point of the fence is. (And how the cover fits in XD) Looking forward to a few more chapters.
it was a neat chapter and it grabbed my attention with the byplay between RD and AJ, but i was kind of lost when it came to what actions where taking place at any given time, it was especially bad when RD and AJ where wrestling and when RD was at the fence. you might want to look into clean up areas like this some just to get a better flow but overall i want to read more of this story. hope to see you next chapter
Hm.... Double Down is a swordsman of some kind. How interesting.
You have my attention. I look forward to more!
Imma give this story a shot
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Indenting new paragraphs would make this far more readable in my opinion. I'm interested in the story so far.
I'm always trying to improve, so feel free to be as harsh as you feel you need to be. If this chapter has come off as easier to read, then great. If not, then I will give it a few more passes before I push out the next chapter which is already done but even longer than this one. Appreciate anyone who reads, whether you enjoy it or not.
6797049 I'm liking the story so far, and yes, this chapter was easier to read.
6797159 Wonderful. I had been reworking the first chapter as well, and plan to tidy it up. Greatly appreciate the feedback, and that you've enjoyed the story so far.
I gave the first chapter a pass over, and hope it was an improvement rather than a step backwards. Eager to hear anything on feedback for those who read the first chapter in it's first alteration, thanks again.
This story has a nice feel to it, can't wait to see what shenanigans ensue. I can't find any stories where the human MC is pissed at the main 6 but also not a villain.
Somepony is really butt hurt ...
I wonder why ....
These chapters... need moar!!!
i have no idea what is goung on. But it is well writen do tracked. Hope it will clarify soon.
Can someone tell me what is going on?
I need more chapters, because i still can't grasp what is going on here.
Ok from what I've gathered DD is living in Ponyville after being sent there by the Princesses. He just wants to be left alone while the ponies are always trying to push themselves on him. He is or was really salty about them pulling out his language to replace it with theirs and for good reason cause they botched the job and his words are wonky. I have no clue what happened with the crusaders.
La etiqueta de sexo está para engañar y ma historia es una perdida de tiempo.