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It looks good, it has a few grammatical error's here and there but not enough to distract from the actual story.
It has a lot of potential and I'd like to see where it goes from here.
But I have a question, seeing as this will take some aspects from Code Geass( Great anime by the way), will there be any Nightmare Frames in the story? and if not, what will replace the Nightmare Frames?
6819349 I'm thinking how to incorporate that in the story. He hasn't seen the anime, but I did, so I will be telling him about how the anime will go into the story. BTW I'm collaborating with the author (forgot to tell him to put my name up in the description).
Let's make it short, fix the grammar or find a corrector, establish a good character, plotline and it's setting. No overly ridiculous magic stuff, no crazy illogical super tech (sorry if most of them are demanding).
on other note, why does T act like an arse and most of the 7 are cowardly? T, Claire, Bolton, and of course Dell and Star must've some degree of martial arts knowledge.
6831613 hoof to hoof combat vs assault rifles. Doesn't really have a good outcome.
6833269 how about this. Star must've known stealth takedowns because of her dad. T is literally a brute and can soak some bullets from a fire team. Claire and Annie has better situational awareness & able to use magic (look at kaidan). CC? Poor sit. Awareness good reflexes. Prism, he's technically a scout or a spotter (remember testing 123). Dell, the sniper. Or the hunter. How about weapons? Why don't you just sneak up, kill, and grab opfor equipment. or, stealthily return to one of the 6's houses and grab a gun.
6833580 Yeah but they would still be fighting a lost cause against an enemy that largely overwhelmed there own country.
Let me guess. Starburst's REAL name is Twilight Sparkle, and Shining Armor is the dying brother. Also, you might want to remind everyone about how related to Code Geass this fiction is.
6835493 Well he never saw the anime, besides some clips of it from me, so I'm telling him about the show and how it will be adapt in the story. Have you read it yet, because what you guessed was completely wrong.
6835396 do not make it into a code geass au. We need real warfare, NATO standard. Look at arma bro. It's either survive, adapt, and win. Or going Alamo. Right now, from my eyes, the friendship kingdom is pitted by the Enclave and the Republic on both sides. If both sides are same assholes with different clothing, go with Alamo plan. Although, I perceive the Republic as a lesser evil.
6835542 Oh. Is the Holy Solar like the Holy Britannia?
6835554 The NLR is going to be like Panem.
6835648 oh, well....I see. It seems that you're dead set on making this into a code grass fanfic. Seems that my suggestions are useless here, hehe.
Guess... I should write a NG fan fiction with acceptable levels of realism. About Equestria being under attack by China-eigh. Or resurgent Northern Griffins, with Pearl Harbor-esque setting.
May we find success on our endeavours.
6835597 Yes.
Bolt : star, remember that portal your mom used to visit other dimensions?
Star : (sobbing) the portal?
Bolt : that's my game plan. I and the rest of the 6 will fool the Enclave by pretending to give us up. Then i'll make a shot to the portal.
Star : wouldn't that be suicidal?
Bolt : better die trying to achieve glory than live as a traitor. Goodbye Star, Ad Victoriam.
Star : (shocked, can't believe a man like him would do such thing) Ad Victoriam.
Cuz I can:
o.o I'm got my lightsaber
Is this dead or simply another one of you guys' breaks, I am asking cuz its been a solid 10 months since your last log on this site? Just asking tho.