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Phazon_Corrupted_Unicorn


I write. I read. I fave. I ship. I love Changelings. Princess Luna is best Princess. Twilight Sparkle is best Mane 6. The Doctor is awesome.

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This story is a sequel to Vampire Night I


Two weeks. It's been two weeks since Fluttershy paid the price of Tasty Treat's crimes. Ponyville has moved on, but there are still scars that last, some more obvious than others.

And in the darkness, something watches and waits.

Why are they here?
And what do they want with the Element bearers?

Author's warning: There is blood in here, more than in the first. That's the reason for the Gore tag. It's Vamponies fighting, what do you expect?

Note: Cover art is not mine. See source. I'll take it down if the artist wants.

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Comments ( 16 )

Wouldn't they have known as soon as Rarity died because her throne would glow?

6718707 That's exactly what I want asked! There's a reason Rarity's throne didn't glow, which will be addressed in the sequel to this.

6718724

Well, I'm glad I could ask the right question then. I look forward to the sequel.

And you just had to leave it open for more Great job loved this

6722577

lolz anyway seems like you got this going just fine and do you mind if I make references to this story in the one I am currently working on?

6722723 Well the whole thing is a group that monitors everything that happens in every reality of anything (Multiverse Theory stuff) and I would just have some of my background ponies be all like "Sir we are picking up signs of multiple Vamponies and Wereponies in MLP FIM 23F. What should we do?"

6722765 Cool. Feel free, but link me when that chapter's up! I'd love to read it!

Fammi capire bene princess luna e un vampiro dalla nascita e sua sorella gli dona il suo sangue x nn farla andare a caccia?
Poi abbiamo fluttlebat ke usa il corpo della sua controparte e adesso condividera anke il corpo,quindi lei diventera un vampony quando torna?adesso ce' anke arcobaleno ke e un vampiro applekack e un lycan x caso ora sono tutti immortali? Apparte gli altri?

6812613 Ok, thanks to google translate I think I understand your questions.

1) I don't have a good idea when Luna became a Vampony, I figured it didn't matter to the story and thus didn't really think about it, just that she is a Vampony and she's at least one of the creators of Vamponies.

2) Fluttershy and Flutterbat? Well, that will be answered in one of the sequels. I've got plans for those two, but you might not see much of them in the next sequel.

3) And for all intents and purposes, yes Applejack, Fluttershy, and Rainbow are immortal. For clarification, Twilight is not.

Or in Google Translate Italian (sorry if it's horrible):

Ok , grazie a Google Translate Credo di capire le vostre domande .

1) Non ho una buona idea quando Luna divenne un Vampony , ho pensato che non aveva importanza per la storia e quindi non ci penso molto , solo che lei è una Vampony e lei è almeno uno dei creatori di Vamponies .

2) Fluttershy e Flutterbat ? Beh , che sarà risolta in uno dei sequel . Ho piani per quei due , ma si potrebbe non vedere molto di loro nel prossimo sequel .

3) E per tutti gli effetti , sì Applejack , Fluttershy , e Rainbow sono immortali . Per chiarezza , di Twilight non è .

7278290 I'd like to complete one sequel and post it on Halloween, or close to it. The first one did well when it was posted on Halloween and I just figured it would be a great trend to continue.

“No, your Highness,” the General replied, “I have heard. The nineteenth Thestral you count is a new trainee. She was assigned to us yesterday and it is Princess Luna’s wish that she get some training. Princess Luna saw this assignment as an easy one, and thus permitted her to join our squadron. We will have a flight of three Thestrals helping her out and teaching her the ropes. I hope you do not mind.”

It's Fluttershy. The 19th is Fluttershy.

The trainee nodded and lowered her head, then turned to the General as he called for all the guards to gather. She followed the Thestrals out, glancing back to look at Twilight who was still sitting in front of Fluttershy’s throne, tears running down her face and splashing onto her coat and the floor. “Not all ponies we love, die,” she whispered to herself as she walked out of the room.

100% Fluttershy.

The guard smiled again, revealing those fangs once more. “We’re not here to protect you from just Vamponies,” he stated, “there are other denizens of the night that might, and will, seek to hurt you s-five.”

At this point it's impossible the trainee isn't Fluttershy

She coughed again, her mouth filling with blood and leaking out of her mouth, running like a river along her face and splashing onto her blond mane. She gurgled a chuckle as she thought of Rarity’s reaction at the mess her mane had become. Her eyesight grew dark along the edges and she felt the wind blow across her body, chilling her blood slightly but not slowing the flow. She caught sight of something flying high above her, carried on the wind and she thought she felt the ground rumble, and she found herself wondering if she’d get wings when she died or if that was only for Pegasi. Her sight faded to black as she closed her eyes, the last thing she saw was a pink mane framing a yellow face and a red eye staring down at her. “I’ll see you soon, Fluttershy,” she mouthed. She felt herself fall away into darkness as she relaxed, a gurgle leaving her mouth as she breathed out for her last time.

Oh good, she saved AJ.

“I know you will,” Flutterbat stated, pulling the sniffling Pegasus into a hug, “but I promise I’ll work on getting you out of here and back into our body. Well, it’s kind of more your body, I’m just borrowing it for a minute.”

I'm confused.

Applejack nodded. “Something is wrong,” she replied, “it feels…off. It’s whole, but there’s something there that shouldn’t be.”

She got Timber'd :pinkiegasp:

Rainbow smirked and nodded. “I was reborn ready!” she shouted.

SNERK

Her eyes closed as she felt her chest grow cold and a river of blood flowed from her mouth, the dripping of her blood off the branch and onto the ground the only sound in the clearing. Her last thought as she breathed her final breath was it’s going to take forever to get the blood from my mane.

Oh, Rarity... never change.

An hour later Twilight awoke, her body sticky with sweat and her eyes wide. She’d remembered what, or rather who she’d forgotten. “Rarity!”

:facehoof:

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