It seems like Twilight Sparkle's human counterpart has destroyed her home universe. Everyone around her fell into the tears in space she created. Holes into Equestria. No one is sure what to do about this situation.
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Sometimes I forget that I've written fan fiction.
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It's an interesting start. Will Sci-Twi end up being given a Rainbow Laser Suntan, courtesy of the original Mane Six? Banished? Imprisoned? Imprisoned where she is banished? Sent to the MMMMOOOOOONNN for 1,000 years?
is twilight insane right now? does she need time to cool down to think?
Instead of just using pony Pinkie Pie and human Pinkie Pie, how about using short names like Pinkie P and Pinkie H?
6754165 Nah, just drunk with power.
Great start, but it kind of fell apart at the end, like you ran out of ideas and just wanted to end it as soon as possible.
It started well, but then it kind of... Got confused? Too many characters, too many scenes, not everything coming to a definite close.
It isn't all bad though, it's a novel concept and a likely situation, it would be nice to see a sequel of some kind, now that everyone knows of the parallel world.
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The two main reasons I haven't made a sequel is that I'd need help keeping what happened in the story straight & I am super lazy (which isn't great for any element of collaboration).
A third reason is I don't have a fully baked premise for a sequel.
Why are there not more storys where this aspect of the friendship games gets explored more thoroughly
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I quite enjoyed your story :)