“And if you say a word, both of you are going to wake up with your coats died hot neon pink.”

Lol

7884893 I second that :3

7884893 I had to check the color, and I will say one thing: MY EYES HURT. That much of pink on the two of them could burn your eyes out. But seriously, good job man. I wasn't expecting three chapters so that's very nice. Until next time.

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7885402 The idea came from a trip I went on to Washington D.C. and we needed a color for our group and I mentioned hot neon pink as a joke. Nearly became fruition though. I would have rocked though.

I feel like I just took a full round of buckshot to the feels. ;_;

7886961 Shes a ghost, so she can essentially take over a living body.

7884893 Dye Celly vantablack

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Having writers block? I know you said you had plenty more of this story to come, but if it's getting difficult to manage, you could just wrap the story up. I wouldn't blame you for it, nor would I be misunderstanding of it.

8006292 HA! That's a good one!
Pft! Writers block... no, i have another chapter almost finished I have plenty of ideas, I need to stop playing Titanfall 2 and work more on this story.
School isn't helping either since I'm taking a drawing and fiction writing class...

Ahh, alright then. Yeah, bro I'm just looking out for ya. Never drag yourself to do something you don't wanna do, life lesson that is. Keep up the great work!

I know the feeling mate. When you get a cool game it takes up all of your time. Though cool chapters so far.

8025939 And I just picked up Ghost Recon Wildlands the other day...

>>REDMAMBA Oh dear more fuel for the procrastination train.

8066450 That is the lore of the game. Defeated and beaten, the Orokin turned to the void and back to the ways of old, of gun and blade. They needed to combat something so advanced that falling back to simple arcane guns and blades to fight, along with a weapon that cannot be corrupted. Look up the lore on the Warframe wiki.

I don't mean to rush but when is the next chapter due?

8106623 Soon...

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You should respond with this picture when someone asks when.
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Hopefully there wont be any major DElay. (Lol, warframe puns) great story!

So, did the whole scene of Melanie learning about Excalibur from jazier get immediately retconned?