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Vanilla Mocha


I enjoy ponies. I enjoy coffee. I enjoy writing. So therefore, this pegasister enjoys FimFiction.

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This story is a sequel to Angel Kisses


Note- This story is being published late (Dec Fourth) because I was offline during Thanksgiving. Many of my followers told me to post it anyways. ^-^

Applejack wonders why Thanksgiving isn't as good as Hearthswarming to the majority of the other ponies. Today, she finds out.

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Aww... sad. Countrified accent seems fine to me.

Then front door to the boutique opened.

This sentence doesn't sound right. I'll let you read it however and figure out what goes there.

A really nice story by the way. Applejack goes and tries to celebrate Thanksgiving only to find that everyone else doesn't celebrate it the way they should and be thankful for something or at least the holiday in and of itself.

I feel indifferent about the message of the story because I don't celebrate holidays and use them to my advantage if I want something like for Christmas for example. But that's usually very rare of me to do so nothing much happens at all for me.

6700558 Thanks for pointing that out! I think I was trying to type "Then the" and I messed up, and autocorrect put the two together. Wrote this on an iPad...

something that bothers me every year. I walk into a store and all I see is Christmas and never really Thanksgiving. Have to make all that stuff myself.

Also, Rarity was really shallow here.

6700813 ^-^

I understand. I was afraid that they'd be out of character due to me making them not focus on Thanksgiving, but I tried.

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